Raindeer

Hey, there! I haven't reviewed in a while so I'm sorry if it's icky. Ah! I always enjoy fantasy stories revolving around princesses and this one was no excuse. Your ...

Hi, hello! I haven't read your first part to this chapter, but I seem to be filled in quite a bit which is fantastic, and I'm not that lost either. ...

Hi, there! Happy Review Day. :) Ooh, this was interesting. I was slightly confused at what was happening until the mentioning of the young girl with her hijab. I love ...

*claps* Holy snickerdoodle cookies, that was amazing. It was so, so inspiring and I loved the ending. Honestly, it was just breathtaking. You take a simple idea that everyone talks ...

Hi, there! This'll be a short review, but a review nonetheless. :p Oh, and welcome to YWS!! I really love this. It's sweet and simple and pretty straightforward. I like ...

Hello!^^ (Sorry for any errors, I'm doing this on my phone >.>) So, the chapters are a bit short, that's true, but I think what could be done is if ...

Hi, there! :) Here to review. I'm going to start with nitpicks- The little girl sat on my lap. You're going present tense here, so 'sat' needs to be 'sits'. ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! :D First off, like the reviewer below me, I'm a bit confused at the first paragraph. There's not reason at all for it to be ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day :D I believe I've read one of these chapters - one of the earlier chapters - so I kind of know and have a feel ...

Hey! Here to review! I honestly - just - uh, wow! I loved it. And why? Because I can relate. I have a younger sister who despises me (not gonna ...

All righty. Review time! Let's start with nitpicks first~~ It’s known for it’s immortal drops, I really love this line. It's pretty, and for some reason 'immortal drops' just sound ...

Hello! Haha, I loved this. The rhyme scheme was awesome and put together nicely. There were a few places that could've been tweaked to have a better rhyme, (the last ...

Hey, Tuesday! I'm going to start with nitpicks. :D First off, the title. All the lines in the poem are "I will be there" yet the title is "I'll be ...

Heya!! Here to review. This is an interesting piece from your story you have here. Just a recommendation, though: next time you can just make this a wall post or ...

Hey, Sunny!! Rainy here for a quick review. This piece was really cute, and, very, very relatable. I mean - everyone here is a writer (if not a writer, then ...