Raindeer

Hi! Here again. I'm probably going to read and review all the chapters after this (up until 5), and if I don't I'll just be reading them. But, I will ...

Hello, Happy Review Day! Percy Jackson is my life... so, I'm here to review. (I'm going to read the chapters before this after I finish this review, and then I'll ...

Hey, there! I haven't reviewed in a while so I'm sorry if it's icky. Ah! I always enjoy fantasy stories revolving around princesses and this one was no excuse. Your ...

Hi, hello! I haven't read your first part to this chapter, but I seem to be filled in quite a bit which is fantastic, and I'm not that lost either. ...

Hi, there! Happy Review Day. :) Ooh, this was interesting. I was slightly confused at what was happening until the mentioning of the young girl with her hijab. I love ...

*claps* Holy snickerdoodle cookies, that was amazing. It was so, so inspiring and I loved the ending. Honestly, it was just breathtaking. You take a simple idea that everyone talks ...

Hi, there! This'll be a short review, but a review nonetheless. :p Oh, and welcome to YWS!! I really love this. It's sweet and simple and pretty straightforward. I like ...

Hello!^^ (Sorry for any errors, I'm doing this on my phone >.>) So, the chapters are a bit short, that's true, but I think what could be done is if ...

Hi, there! :) Here to review. I'm going to start with nitpicks- The little girl sat on my lap. You're going present tense here, so 'sat' needs to be 'sits'. ...

Hi there! Happy Review Day! :D First off, like the reviewer below me, I'm a bit confused at the first paragraph. There's not reason at all for it to be ...

Hey there! Happy Review Day :D I believe I've read one of these chapters - one of the earlier chapters - so I kind of know and have a feel ...

Hey! Here to review! I honestly - just - uh, wow! I loved it. And why? Because I can relate. I have a younger sister who despises me (not gonna ...

All righty. Review time! Let's start with nitpicks first~~ It’s known for it’s immortal drops, I really love this line. It's pretty, and for some reason 'immortal drops' just sound ...

Hello! Haha, I loved this. The rhyme scheme was awesome and put together nicely. There were a few places that could've been tweaked to have a better rhyme, (the last ...

Hey, Tuesday! I'm going to start with nitpicks. :D First off, the title. All the lines in the poem are "I will be there" yet the title is "I'll be ...