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  • Short Story » General, General Re: She's not as strong as you think

    Hiya! Review time! Okay, Spelling: A+ Grammar: A Punctuation A+ Emotion: A Overall: A+ This was great! I loved the detail and Emotion put in but best was your Spelling, ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Dangerous Because We Are Desirable

    Review Day Mode PonyzandPokez style! Spelling:100% Grammar:100% Emotion:100% Formatting:100% OMG Great poem and you got a perfect! I was surprised to end up giving out a perfect score but it ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Untitled

    Review time CP21 here or PonyzandPokez! Spelling: 100% Grammar: 100% Emotion: 100% Formatting: 100% OMG This is the FIRST poem I have ever read that has gotten a PERFECT score ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Room for insanity?

    Hiya PonyzandPokez here! Reviewing time! Spelling: 100% AWESOME! Grammar: 100% Perfection! Emotion: 100% YES! Formatting: 95% Pretty good! Nice! You wrote a poem almost to perfection! Spelling was per

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Film, Science Fiction Re: The real Dr. Who?

    PonyzandPokez here to review ^^ DOCTOR WHO Nice poem by the way oh and here are my ratings for you. Grammar: 95% Sweet, that was REALLY good! Spelling: 100% LOL ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: I see a...

    PonyzandPokez here reviewing you poem Woah girl calm down! Spelling: 100% Grammar: 100% Emotion: 1000% Formatting: 90% Good job! Your emotion went off the charts and I loved it, I ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: My First Death

    PonyzandPokez reviewing your poem ^^ This is what I thought: I focus a lot on Grammar Spelling Emotion and Formatting those are my categories and I rate actually so your ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Gloom.

    OMG Crystal here btw, Owls Mowing Grass this is awesome! I haven't seen a lot from you before but this is great! I feel like you captured many emotions very ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Other » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Brainstorm Ideas for Fairy Story: Legacy of the Fairy Elves

    Hi, Reviewing this CP21, Anyway, so I think you need more setting. Maybe the murderer has associates, add them in. Who shot the stray arrow? Was it really a mistake? ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Church is Bloodstained

    Hi! CrystalPony21 here to review your work! Okay: So here's what I thought of it. So I'm guessing that the thing is your trying to bless yourself and it isn't ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What Lies Inside

    Hey MysteryMe, its CrystalPony21 here to review this is what I thought of the piece (don't worry I'm no critique) This was amazing! I loved how well written it was ...

    Nov 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Falling Conversations and Lost Children

    Hiya Audy, CrystalPony21 here to review this AWESOME work of literature for you! So here is what I though: Okay, this is great! The grammar got an 8 from me, ...

    Nov 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Scarlet soul

    CrystalPony21 here to review your interesting and awesome work, heres what I thought of it! Hope this helps. This is a great poem I read poems differently than most so ...

    Nov 23, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Memories on Grave.

    Hi! CrystalPony21 is here to review! This is what I thought DreamWork: I have something to tell you... :( THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ...

    Nov 16, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Escape

    Hi! Crystal here to review!! By the way welcome to Young Writers Society!!!!! This is what I thought of this poem of yours Newbie! I liked this poem because I ...

    Nov 10, 2013


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