RachelLeeAnn

Hello, there! Rachel here to review! :) First off: I am so happy to find someone who loves this song as much as I do! I found it a couple ...

Hello, there! Rachel here to review! :) This is a relatable piece. I feel everyone can recall having bad dreams and nightmares as small children. You portrayed that very well! ...

Hello, there! Rachel here to review. :) This is a very harsh poem-not necessary grammatically, rather, it is a harsh subject. Some of the words chosen made me cringe. Perhaps, ...

Hello, there! :) Rachel here to review. This piece, though wordy, was good. The concept of who you're writing about is a bit unclear, though. Is it a father-figure? A ...

Hello! Rachel here with a review. :) This a great piece. You created great imagery of two men just standing there, weapons drawn, both summoning the courage to do what ...

Hello there! :) This is a lovely poem you've written. I like how you compare words to the shot of a gun. Very unique. I can feel such passion and ...

Hello, there! Let me start off by saying this held my interest very well! I didn't even notice how long it was until I had already finished reading it. The ...

Wow. Thank you for writing this piece. I know you will be able to speak to many, many people with this- myself included. You've got a talent, and with this ...

My, my, my. You've written a lovely piece here. I have nothing to nitpick or change; this is beautifully written. During the 'flashback,' if you will, you captured that essence ...

Hello there, Rothwise! :) You reviewed some of my work, so I wanted to return the favor. I wasn't sure what to expect when I clicked on this, but I'm ...

Hello there :) Rachel here to review. While your piece is very well written, I'm having trouble seeing the main point. The conclusion was unclear. I'm not sure if this ...

My goodness. I really liked this! That sarcastic tone in the humor is something I adore. That and the banter between our main character and his loved ones. It's fantastic. ...

Hello! Rachel here to review. :) I really admire this piece. You've seem to have put the thoughts of writers everywhere into on compact story- skillfully so, I might add. ...

Hello, blimeylimey217! :) This is a beautiful piece you've written here! The only thing I noticed was this: The water rises around me, I'm drowning. The hope for survival, I'm ...

This is lovely! You immediately captured my attention with the first couple sentences. You make readers pay attention and think to get a mental image of what you've written here-- ...