'The only way to get rid of a temptation is to yield to it.' ~ Oscar Wilde.
Humans are often motivated by primal desires. Impulses that we cannot (and sometimes do not) want to control. However, some people would seek sensual fulfilment as part of the pursuit of 'Hedonism' - The Greek word for pleasure.
Psychologically and evaluatively hedonism makes two main claims. Firstly that only pain and pleasure experiences are of use to us. Secondly that pleasure is the highest valued intrinsic good of human life.
Examination of whether this is categorically sound could suggest otherwise.
CowLogic: 'Hedonism is the effect of misplaced goals. When one seeks only to derive pleasure from a given situation, they are missing the big picture. Pleasure is transient. Short term inhibition of dopamine from neurotransmitters. With transience, transcendence is impossible. One cannot merely float between events seeking a singular and disappearing goal.'
By nature, humans are creatures of habit, therefore accessible, repetitive goals such as seeking pleasure are appealing to the nature of the mind. However, if it were to become the sole focus of the individual, this could cause complications...
Letiki: 'They are very short term, and can become intervened with much less pleasant emotions if a consistent sense of overall happiness is not achieved. It would be very limiting. From a social perspective, it does not imply any benefit. It's only a philosophy that a few can indulge in I think, as if everyone were to become hedonistic it could well cause serious problems.'
What could be described as becoming a 'selfish nation' would mean raised levels of self interest within communities, possibly promoting egotistical elitism. Whilst failure may be educational, it is not a pleasant condition and continual subjection to a single state of being may cause issues within the mind of the character.
567ajt: 'Because pleasure and pain are important experiences to deny them would be repression. Basically: hedonism acknowledges both pain and pleasure; this is significant in understanding ourselves and others. To know what pleasures us and what hurts us is important to know for personal development individually as well as part of a social group.'
Certainly, there are benefits to such sensations, however whether or not yielding to temptation is always profitable to us begs a bigger question: Does excess eradicate?
It could be said there are: 'Too many temptations to put into one group.' And classification of such urges would be subjective to individuals. With so many different ideas about what counts as 'pleasure' and 'pain' it would seem almost impossible to define temptations under a universal title.
Despite this: (567ajt): 'If we are talking about drugs and alcohol for example, physical eradication could take place, and thus should NEVER be put into practice. Besides, the temptations of sex and pleasure - if you call them 'temptations' - is something we should not even attempt to eradicate.'
Whilst it is foolish to fight human nature, there are levels to which we should combat our desires, not to remain conventional, but for our safety, peace of mind and personal satisfaction.
InfinityAndBeyond: 'I think there's nothing wrong with pleasure but it shouldn't be a sole purpose to everything you do... I think not all pleasure is necessarily good and not all pain is necessarily bad.'
Hedonism remains a controversial philosophical movement, the ideology that pleasure should be your sole pursuit in life may be viewed by some as quite extreme. It would be fair to say that we all slightly conditioned to be hedonistic, in the sense that spending each day of our lives in physical or mental pain would prevent us from functioning. Ironically, it is part of life's cycle to present trials of an unpleasant nature that we must overcome.
This can only help us grow as people once we experience either the success of failure in rising to meet these challenges. To dedicate ourselves to securing what is essentially only half of the fabric of our world seems somewhat futile.
'The aim of the wise is not to secure pleasure, but to avoid pain.' ~ Aristotle
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While your piece is very well written, I'm having trouble seeing the main point. The conclusion was unclear. I'm not sure if this was supposed to be a persuasive piece, or merely just an opinion: regardless, it's a little fuzzy. Perhaps take the time to go back and rewrite the sections that are unclear?
The bits and pieces I did understand were very nice, and they exhibited the skill for writing that you obviously have. Keep at it; I'd love to see where you take this.
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I feel like, for reading flow, the "Firstly" and "Secondly" should have commas after them. It makes it easier to read, almost like built in bullet points that the reader mentally inserts without really thinking about it.
The comma before therefore should be a semi-colon or a period. Otherwise this is a comma splice.
So what you're saying is that we shouldn't pursue pleasure because it brings up a situation which is unpleasant, and our motivation to avoid that situation is the pursuit of pleasure? That's either not what this means or a self-contradiction.
I completely missed the point with this one. Either your quote needs to be more fully explained, or the quote itself needs more material, or it needs to be tossed...or something. I don't know, but as is it doesn't do anything for the piece.
After reading that piece, I came away still confused by what the point of this piece was. I think you need to go back and see where it's still unclear and try to settle your argument more concretely.
I hope this helps!
Really liked this, big believer in hedonism and I think you've created a really analytical and perceptive piece. Personally though, I would prefer something more astute, push the boundaries of conception maybe.
Not my cup of tea, but well written
This is really interesting and I have never thought of this before. Thank you for further educating me in words and meanings behind the words. I hope that you keep doing this even though it will possibly be work for school. I saw no mistakes and I think you are a very talented writer. Keep it up.