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This is a nice peace, and it does a good job at telling hard truths of life with a innocence that is almost childlike. It conveys the joy you take ...

This is nice, and it would be cute if you didn't have some of those spelling and gramarical mistakes in there. I especially love the flow and rhyming of the ...

Very creative! Though really, the way it is written I can't really fault you on your format, ideas, or word choice. ( : / ... Now what am I supposed ...

Very pretty, and a little chilling to be honest with you. I liked the way that you capitalized Death, turning it into something that is suddenly more real and less ...

Very nice, and none the worse for its shortness. I quite liked it actually. :D Nitpicks: 1. In the third line of the first stanza I wouldn't use 'runs' as ...

Very nice! I especially like the first poem, as a whole. Some Nitpicks: 1. In the first poem you shouldn't have punctuation at the end. The rest of the poem ...

This is beautiful, and it reminded me of how I used to feel. This is a great message, and I especially liked the line, "And only then could I see ...

This is pretty, with a rather odd theme. You used something to which most people could relate to convey a message that was very pretty, if a little sad. The ...

This is very beautiful, though I sort of have the same sort of feeling I had after reading this line in the Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy: "The argument goes ...

This is really quite beautiful, and has some fantastic imagery in it. The interchanging use of the regular text and the italicized text was well done, and the idea was ...

This is really beautiful, and it has an absolutely beautiful message (that a lot of people here seem to need to hear) It has a nice flow for a free ...

This is really nice, with a good message that is present in oh-too-many friendships. I enjoyed it, and it flowed well. I especially liked the paragraph that was third to ...

Very nice, though I might not be the best judge. I don't usually read acrostics or love poems...even sort of-ish love poems. Anyway, I enjoyed the theme, and it laid ...

That last part took me completely by surprise, and even made me laugh aloud. :D Congratulations, some poems just can't make me do that, even the completely comedic ones. I ...

It was nice. It was an interesting theme, and it made me think, which I happen to enjoy doing. I've often wondered if I was insane, and I just didn't ...