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Re: A Haiku in dream
One of the things that I like about this is that you have a interesting way of interning a way of writing and I like it. Also to me I ...
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Re: untitled;unknown
This is one of the shortest poems i have ever read because it only has 3 stanzas and this is very different from the other ones because it isn't as ...
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Re: Grey Sweater
I like the way you start you poem and there are somethings I would like to tell you somethings that I think you should know.One of the is that you ...
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Re: The Living Abyss - Chapter 7: The Soft Fabric of Reality
Hello I would like to talk to you about your writing one is that the way you write is very different from what other people write and that is a ...
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Re: Cuz...'not you' ( Experimental poetry 1.1)
I like the way you start your story off because it has a lot of good things and a lot of bad things to go on with the poem but ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: August [Sugar Sweet Tears #5]
I like the way you start your story off but there are somethings that I would like to tell you, and one of those things are that you need to ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: A Shout in My Ears, Holes in Our Hearts
I like the way you write your poems but there are a few things that I need to tell you before I go. One of those things is that you ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: For all that we do...
Your writing is one of the best that I have read today and there are some things I would like to say if I might. One of the things I ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: The Epiphanies
I like the way you are writing because after you write something you go back to that in the end. And I would like to talk to you about the ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Poem: An Analysis
What you are saying is true in different way but first let me tell you of what I think of the poem I just read. One of the things is ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Home
I like the way you are doing things like once you write something you add something to go with that. Like when you wrote one stanza you wrote something under ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: Living
This is a really good story but the good thing about this is that you are telling the truth. For instance I have a good feeling about you and the ...
Apr 3, 2016 -
Re: The constant battle with hell
One word wow.That was the shortest poem "ever" and there would be a few things I would like to talk to you about. One of them is that you need ...
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: Prologue: Form on the Plain
First of I just want to say that this one of those stories that just pulls you in in the first line.But for this one you showed a picture to ...
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