PurpleHeart

Hey There! I wont spend any time on grammatical stuff, because the other's have already got it covered(: I just want to say that i felt it was kinda rocky ...

This is a really great poem! You really took the emotion and drew it out and explored all the feelings that go along with it. I do agree though, that ...

Hey! I liked this a lot! Like Bolshevik said, the personificition is excellent! You had a good equal amount of time on each of the emotions, but i cant help ...

[quote="bookcutie"] Rejected - i like the simplicity of the beginning Realizing what he just said is Exactly the opposite of what you wanted him to*, you want him to Just ...

Heyy - FIrst Off: I LOVED THIS! A long time ago, something like this happened to me, and you so expertly captured all the emotions and questions and thoughts... you ...

Hey! For only 15 minutes - Excellent! :DD I really liked this - the emotions were flooding which is something i personally crave in poems. I think you did a ...

Absolutely spectacular! Whether you read it in your head or out loud, the rhythym, the rhyming, the flow, the thoughts, its all just right! It's so simple, but there's definitely ...

Fabulous job! I dont see anything, really that i'd change about this; its a little vague in places, and then in some, a lotttt of detail, which kinda makes the ...

I've read this over and over again at least 8 times Matthew. I absolutely, without a doubt, love it, more than anything you've ever written. I've cried everytime i've read ...

Woah. ^_^ *confesses* i avoided this piece for a long time, even though it was in the "featured works" section, just because i thought it would be some weird love-of-math ...

july4ruby, I really liked this poem! TThe rhythym flows really well, and the words work together quite nicely. The emotions are displayed very delicately and very strong - good combination! ...

Heyy NDivz! First off let me say that i absolutely lovedddd this poem! :D Overall, the flow of it is spectacular, the emotions are constant and very well described, the ...

This is completely spectacular! i agree with the above critiques, about grammatical changes and altering the flow in some places... and there's nothing i really have to say other than ...

I really like the changes you made to it since you first wrote it; i liked it then, but now it's just that much more spectacular! I still think someday ...

Lele If I had nine hearts Would it push me to love? Would it make me bear the gifts He sends me from above? -these two lines seem unfitting for ...