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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Last Time

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I can definitely see the strong and broken emotion in this. I hope this doesn't seem intruding but ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Loneliness

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Hmm this is an interesting subject of loneliness during a conversation of two people. This is a simple ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: 762

    Hey there! Purple here to give a (slight) review! Let's get down to business. I'm sorry but this made almost zero sense to me :x The first stanza was building ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Morning Rituals

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. Wow! This poem is absolutely fantastic! Great imagery and use of powerful words in general. This poem immediately ...

    Mar 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Finding the Words

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. This is such a thought provoking and beautifully written poem! At first, it seems like you are asking ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Selfish Me

    Hey there! How are you? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started. I love this poem so much I can hardly express it. It starts sad but ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Homewrecker

    Hey there! How are you? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started WOW! This is a fantastic first impression you have made upon me! I'm blown away ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic Re: Penny Rings

    Hey there! How are ya? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. This is a very interesting poem. I like your mention or copper and ...

    Feb 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: If procrastination was a degree!

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get down to business. This is a much different approach to poetry that I've seen on YWS. I'm just confused ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: That Particular Juicy Fruit I Crave About Every Boring Morning

    Hey there! How are you, today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started :) First of all, welcome to YWS!! If I'm not mistaken I think you've ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Supernatural, Dramatic Re: Salto Mortal

    Hey there! How are you, today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started :) This was an interesting poem to read. Is this about longing/love? It's a ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: I Was a Marionette

    Hey there! How are you, today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started :) Just one word for this, wow! This has definitely been one of the ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That Moment When...

    Hey there! How are you, today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started :) I rather like how you connect the first line of the poem as ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Show

    Hey there! How are you, today? Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started :) This was a pretty interesting read. It seemed a little scatter-brained at some ...

    Feb 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Jack

    Hey there! Purple here to give you a review! Let's get started.. This is a strange take on transgender people, which is actually very unclear until the last few lines. ...

    Feb 24, 2014


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