Pompadour

Hey Milaita! Pompadour here for a quick review! OK, so I really enjoyed reading this. You created a good atmosphere, and Sam's thoughts seemed to ... flow. They weren't robotic ...

I loved reading this! It's creepy and yet I can so understand how this was a huge step for you back in your childhood. Creative writing teacher, huh? She must've ...

Hey star! I'll just plunge straight into the review then, shall I? Ok, so the first thing I have to say is this: is this meant to be prose poetry? ...

Hey DreamWork! Thought I'd drop by for a quick review! ( I don't know why I say that, reviews are never quick. Heh.) So, anyway, I think I should start ...

My. Brain. Just. Combusted. Whoo. OK, so hi! Thought I'd review this, so here I am. But I agree with Buggiedude here. Your characters seem unreal, plastic, perfect. And let ...

Hi Bunnie! Pompadour here for a review! So, first off, I'd like to say that it's nice to see something like this pop up again. And I mean really nice. ...

Hi Secrete! I like this! It's short and fuzzy and sweet. But being the *clears throat* Nazi I am, I'll hasten to point out that you have a typo in ...

Hey, ShadowsGirl9! So let's get cracking, shall we? So I noticed you had a well-defined rhyme scheme in the last three stanzas, and there was a kinda rhymey thing going ...

Heya, SparkToFlame! I've plodded over for a quick review! So, I think I'll begin by telling you how much I love this line: "i've been losing sleep, staring at the ...

This is beautiful! And I know I'm repeating the same thing so many people have already said, but it really, truly is! I could see everything happen so clearly. The ...

Hey Becca! Pompadour here for a review! So what I have to say is this: First off, I like the idea! It's twisted, and it's... different. I mean, how the ...

Heya. Here for a quick review. OK, so first off, I got really twitchy and all when I saw you'd misspelled "Exposed" in the title. You might want to correct ...

This. Was. So. Real. Sam was real, anyway. You had this way of developing this image, despite not having described in unnecessary detail, every action and every movement was unnervingly ...

Hey Morticiansdaughter19! I've popped over for a quick review! OK, so at first, I thought you were talking about a real person, but as I read on I realized you ...

Hey Deanie! I'm here for a review! I like how you've structured the poem, and it presents a very deep idea! I love how you've used oxymorons throughout. And then ...