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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Today we say goodbye

    Heya GreenTulip! Pompadour here for a quick review! OK, so I liked the foundation to this poem. It was a really touching idea, and the repetition you've used leaves a ...

    Feb 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 3

    *yawns* I'm here to *yawns again* t-to review. And I'll try to stay awake for this, but this review's probably going to be short. Let me just cut to the ...

    Feb 15, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: On the brink.

    Hello there Fiendy! I'm here to review -- and for stating the obvious... So let's get cracking! OK, so I really enjoyed reading this poem. Not only was it lighthearted ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: The Battle of Marathon, And Aftermath Part 2

    Pancakes and pasta! I'm here to (finally) review! OK, so this chapter was even better than the first one, mainly because it provides us with details and allows a clearer ...

    Feb 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: A Smile of Light

    Timmy!! I decided to pop by for a review 'cause that's what cookie ninjas do! So let's get cracking! OK, so I loved how you finished this piece off. It ...

    Feb 3, 2014
  • Lyrics » Humor, General Re: For the First Time (In Grad School)

    Oh my gosh, this is so awesome!! I actually sang it out loud at three in the morning and my brother had to yell at me to shut up. It's ...

    Feb 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Something Called a Friend

    Fine. I'll admit it. This poem made me cry. It was just so filled with raw, seething emotion and I could totally understand the meaning behind the verses. So simple, ...

    Jan 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: How To Catch A Cold With A Butterfly Net

    I absolutely loved this poem! It was one of those deep but simple things, like melodies you hear every single day, and yet they manage to strike you just as ...

    Jan 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Invasion of Chocolate

    Yello Spammy! Happy review day! Thank you so much for writing this! :D I didn't think you'd really do it, and it was so lighthearted and altogether hilarious that it ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Warm as Ice: Prologue, Remembered.

    Sushi! Pompadour here has dropped by from the world of violent cookie-bombs and is here for a review! And now I'm talking in third-person. Great. OK, so let's get cracking! ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: You Can't Change Me

    Heya FatCowsSis! Pompadour here for a review! (Because I've been procrastinating and I really need to review more often!) OK. Let's get cracking then, shall we? :D So, first off, ...

    Feb 18, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Humor Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)

    How absolutely enlightening! The language you used was of an eloquence that is rarely ever observed in essay-writing, and it flowed smoothly. There were no jarring bits or vague mentions ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Now and Forever

    Heya vluvswriting! Pompadour here for a quick review! OK, so first off, you strike me as a romantic. Just the feeling I get. But while you obviously have rhyming-skill, and ...

    Jan 19, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You were in it For ink and honey

    Why hello there, InTheTrees! Pompadour here for a quick review! OK, so I absolutely loved the title you've chosen here! I mean, it really made me think. Ink and honey? ...

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Historical Fiction Re: Battle of Marathon, Pt. 4

    *whizzes in, panting* OK, this is going to be another short review -- if you can ever call my reviews short, that is. As usual, I'll just skim over the ...

    Feb 18, 2014


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