PollarBear14

Im tired of sad poetry, Reminding me that all life sucks, Why not some cute poetry, Of fluffy little ducks? The rhymes in this stanza are a bit awkward. Im ...

I really liked this poem. It was fun to read and amusing. The humour is a nice touch. If you had tried to be serious then you would have crashed ...

Fantastic poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love every bit of it. This is a topic I am passionate about too and it is so amazing to see someone put the same emotions I ...

Great poem. I love the obvious emotion that you display yet you don't reveal exactly what you are talking about at all. I think it's about the need to wear ...

Nice deep poem with an ominous feel. I like it. Alone, I stand in the shadowy autumn dusk A sweetness tasted in the air, remains; And the evening smells of ...

This is one of my favourite poems on the website! Such a unique idea combined with such clever language is impossible to criticise. If that bar of soap could talk ...

Hi. Great title to go with a great poem. It was simple and elaborated on a thought that nearly everyone has. Sometimes, I look up into the sky in wonder, ...

I'm sorry but I don't like this poem. It just doesn't make sence. You go all over the place without explaining anything. I don't understand what your getting at. And ...

Great poem. I love the language and the subject matter. You think I don't see how you cling to shadow, like my skin to me and flowers to meadow ? ...

I really like this poem. I love the language you have used because it is simple and is read as you would really say it. If you had put any ...

I agree with JCK. Your poem does rhyme and the rhyming is not too strained which is good but the whole message is a bit vague and does not provoke ...

Great poem. I loved how you used such beautiful, clever metaphors that are unique yet very fitting. I could really see what you were talking about and I really like ...

Hi. First off, I really liked this poem. It was just interesting and had great language that was neither too simple nor too complex or abstract. But there were a ...

Hi. First of all I want to say how much I love the sort of weary conviction in your words. But although I can feel the emotion in them I ...

Hi. This poem is alright and has the pontential to be very powerful but I think it needs a little bit of work. The flow of the poem is a ...