Celestian.

The title is rockin', for one. It really draws the reader in, almost like the lead to a story. Anyway, I love how you make it seem as though the stars are beings. The last line, "Or yours?", gave me the feeling that the beings in the stars, if they do exist, were watching over me, and that they knew my story. I think it was an amazing piece of writing and to be honest, there really isn't anything I can see that I would change. So great piece, and keep writing!

Hi. Great title to go with a great poem. It was simple and elaborated on a thought that nearly everyone has.

Sometimes, I look up into the sky in wonder,
on those clear, cloudless winter nights.
And I see stories and tales that the stars have seen.
The watchful eyes of the universe. Personification! Good touch.First four lines are fantastic.
And as I gaze my mind wanders among them,
and sometimes I pick one, just one.
Why one? You ask? Truthfully, I don't know.
But I try to conclude, why that star.
Why do I gaze at it, and am I watched in return? Great line.

Will they remember my story?
Or yours? I think it should end with "And will I remember theirs?"

First, I'd like to say that I love the title. It really drew me in, I think because it sounds so fantastical. Second, I'd like to say that you really summed up the way I feel sometimes. And I think everybody feels that way, just taking it all in and wondering why things are the way they are. My favorite line was the one about how you wonder if anybody will ever remember your story. I always wonder that. LIke, will my life make a difference, will my name be known? That kind of stuff. If I have any complaints, I think you could have been more... poetic about. Metapahors, similes, alliteration... They're what separate poems from reflective writing. I don't really know any other way to explain it. I'm by no means an expert with poetry; my stuff isn't even that good. But I really think some figurative language could spice it up. Anyway, good job and keep writing. I look forward to reading more.