PoetryMisfit

Hi there! Just wanted to leave a quick review. Your poem flows like a song and actually reminds me of Driver's License by Olivia Rodrigo with the forlorn recollection of ...

I love this poem... I mean REALLY love this poem! The fairytale writing style and the whimsical flow compliment each other really well. Also, I love how you write about ...

Hi there. I just wanted to leave a quick review. First off, I really enjoyed your poem; it was emotionally wrenching and profound. I really like the way you portrayed ...

Hi there. I just wanted to leave a quick review. I really like your poem, the style reminds me of a bard or a court jester telling a riddle; it's ...

Hi there! I would love to share my thoughts on your story. You have such an amazing opening line, which can honestly make or break a story, but yours definitely ...

Hello Magebird. Your poem really resonated with me beause it touched on some very real feelings that, being a 20-year-old myself, can definitely relate to! There honestly isn't anything I ...

I love how it starts out like a fairytale. I feel transported to the world you've created. "The merfolk were powerful beings, whose songs controlled storms and hearts, whose beauty ...

Hey there, I just wanted to share a few thoughts. I love how your story jumps straight into the scene at hand, which helps solidify the characters. I'm definitely getting ...

Hey there, just wanted to share a few thoughts. ** I'll comment as I read through your story and save final thoughts for the end. Whoa the first line automatically ...

Hey there, just wanted to share my review of this piece: So first off a few pointers: "Musing my bleached blond hair I slowly settled into a state of placidity." ...

"It was the first breath of mankind and its last step. Delivered from the womb of existence, humanity had just started on its journey, and now it was ending. Perhaps ...

Hi there! I must say that the first words that come to my mind to describe this story are: immersive and profound. The way you write portrays Ludia's struggles in ...

Hi there! I really enjoyed this piece. I felt transported to the scene with your description and can definitely see this featured as a piece somewhere in a literary magazine ...

Hi! I loved this story so much! You did a really good job with bringing Frankie to life and making him a relatable character I feel like I would actually ...

Hi there! First off I think your writing is great and the story is very compelling, though I do have a few proofreading edits I'd like to mention: "She brushed ...