PlainandSimple

Hello @hiraeth ! Here to review your poem! Okay, so the title didn't give me much of a hook, like as you said it is a little cringy. Your whole ...

Hello! Here to review your work! I just want to say, this is a really amazing poem. From the title, I was hooked. I want more, no I think I ...

Here to review your work :) Sorry it's gonna be a little short because I'm short on time but I really thought this was an interesting story so I just ...

Hello! I'm here to review your poem! This is really great! Wow, it really gets me thinking about things I would never think about otherwise. That is so great. I ...

hello! ok, so now after being on this website for a few weeks or something know I know a little about poetry. I know enough to give a okay review ...

Hello! Here to review! Literally preach! Life is a struggle as it is. There are so many things that people are struggling with that no one even knows. Some people ...

Hello! Here to review your work! (I'm a little tired so, well I get a little weird when I'm tired so yea) Anyway, I really like this story. It was ...

Hello! Here to review your work! (This will be short, and I'm sorry) My initial thought was how interesting, a script. There are very few scripts on this website, so ...

Hello! Here to review your work! It is simple, short, but has a huge impact. The impact is sexual assault. The reader (me) doesn't know who was assaulted, the reader ...

Hello, here to review. (Sorry this will be short) Although I don't completely understand what you are talking about I like it. I enjoy that I can tell your thoughts ...

hello! Here to review. I really enjoy your reason behind writing this! How you say things are truly breathtaking, good job. I really like your hook, it drags me in. ...

hello, here to review your work! Death is such a sad thing that it a minute occurrence. Something that never would make sense to us, and why it happens. Something ...

Hello, here to review! Although it's short it so strong! I get what you are saying in only 6 short lines. The whole short poem is like a hook. I ...

Hello! here to review your poem! I just want to say first about your hook, it's really great. It kept me reading from the very end. Along with the words ...

Hello! Here to review your work! It is a simple story but has a lot of meaning to it. This world is full of liars and this is what happens ...