Pigeon

My first suggestion would be to resubmit these all separately. Putting them all together is confusing. An actual 'collection' of poems is usually written to go with each other, and ...

Hi, pigeon here to review :) Okay, so you said you don't really care about grammar, but I'm going to make a few very basic corrections anyway, because if your ...

For my love, You press your forehead against mine, this love, this beauty, this secret valentine . My lips trace the arch of your neck . I really like this ...

Linda Warrant walked down the long corridor to the golden doors. In her left hand she held her laptop, in her right, he r purse. She pushed the big golden ...

Come on, you can do better than that. :P What happened to your meter? You break it in just about every verse. I think I've heard this one before? And ...

Hey, :) I'm here to review as requested. (which totally made my day, I don't think anyone's requested a review from me before :D ) When I was little, life ...

Cynicism in a poetic style which is typically romantic; fun. :) I love it. And yes, iambic pentameter is, in the words of Bernard Shaw "babyishly easy", so you have ...

breannarh covered most things, so I've only got one thing to add: Poems don't have to rhyme. I think maybe you should try out some different poetic styles and forms ...

I quite like this! It really got me in and I'd be interested to see where the story is going. :) Just a few nitpicks: Normally it would hang in ...

Taras held Nastya close to him, her amber eyes were glowing reflecting off of the light. He was not going to let her go again. They were together now and ...

This is really lovely. It's about a girl whose friend is the popular girl at school, and when she leaves the mc takes her place? Yes? That's what I got, ...

Hi there :) this is tricky to review as I don't really know what it's meant to be. It sounds like it might be a real letter you've written? Or ...

This is so beautiful! I have nothing helpful to say, sorry, I just loved the whole thing! It's so hypnotically rhythmic. A sweet surreal existence of something I once knew. ...

Hi there :) I really liked the imagery of this poem. You create a beautiful picture. I'm a little confused as to what it's about though. Her heart knows no ...

So, I just read like three of your poems, and I'm pretty sure you've been looking inside my head and describing what you see. Haha :) I can relate so ...