Her melodic laughter fills the field with sparks of purple glitter, the light so clear you fail to see accurately.
Her eyes so green, glistening like dewdrops after fallen rain; her hair as blonde as the radiating sun.
She flutters into the field with such grace you are suddenly unable to respire; she dances upon the very orchid dandelions in which you lay.
She leaps perfectly with her dense toes among the flowers; dipping, twirling, posing.
Her heart knows no fear, so neither shall you. But she leaves you clueless as she dances around you.
How I love my Sugar Plum Fairy, for she leaves me as a wolf in sheeps clothing.
With her I will meet lovely people, or another victim to pursue.
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The title is so pretty
And the poem is, too!
All I'd suggest is working on that structure.
It's not really very... poem'y at the moment.
But the imagery - and the title - is just lovely
Hi there
In these lines I don't really know what's going on. Maybe you could make it a little clearer somehow? Or maybe I'm just too tired and I'm missing something, I don't know. XDI really liked the imagery of this poem. You create a beautiful picture.
I'm a little confused as to what it's about though.