Pernicus

hello, reviewing this. thematically, this poem resonates with me. i find the tone it builds to be very cathartic. it starts off how many of my favourite poems do, apologetic ...

Hi, review time. To start with what I liked, I thought you nailed the initial reaction down pretty well. As someone who has received a call like that, you got ...

Hi, review time. First to start with what I like. Conceptually, the poem has a lot of strengths. The theme is interesting, and the third person focus on the character ...

Next review! Annotated document (Finished but I'm adding more to it over the next while) I said a lot in the annotations so I'll keep this review part brief. I've ...

The story is off to an interesting start, thematically we are made aware instantly of the divisions in this society, which means the conflict in the story is possibly going ...

I'm sorry if this repeats the other reviews it was not my intention. I know that the length has been brought up earlier but its still worth a comment, yes ...

I was initially super hesitant to review this, I really wanted to but this poem is intimidating. I have now gotten over the trepidation but I still think I should ...

I'll try to review the poem as best I can, since I'm a newbie at poeting don't expect anything super useful. I'll start with my favourite part of the narrative ...

The first time I read this I assumed the perspective was a person walking atop the water but I soon started to develop a new idea. The visual qualities of ...

I'll start of by saying that this poem does a good job at painting a picture, the description works well and I am able for the most part to visualise ...

I'll try to be helpful. Thematically the story seems to have established its base here, it being centred on the issues in a family. This theme is a good one, ...

The flow of words is of industry standard, it's impressive. The sentences are varied in length structure and composition, gluing the reader to the page. This is all vapid though, ...

I like the meaning this poem has and genuinely tries to express an emotion, and for the most part it succeeds. I have a few problems with it which I ...

Reviewing this. I found this poem for the most part fairly intriguing. It has a strong opening with a brash statement that really tries to set a tone for the ...

Time to review! This poem is quite thought provoking, it made me reflect on my mortality, the short nature of life, and the notion of identity. The way it compares ...