Pentavalence

Hiya, pentavalence here with a review. So first of all, this piece had a lot of things I like: fun, unusual descriptions--especially with the lavender--, interesting characters, and a slight ...

Hi! Pentavalence here with a review. So it's pretty hard to review this piece, because it's pretty short. However, there's still a lot of depth to it and I'll try ...

Hi, pentavalence here with a review. And what review would this be if there wasn't a disclaimer? So: I don't know anything about poetry. Please take all my criticism with ...

Hello, Pentavalence here with a review. (I’m typing this on mobile, please forgive my typos) What a unique story! (And I mean unique in a good way. People have taken ...

Hi, this is pentavalence here with a review. Wow. There's a lot to unpack here. Let's start there, actually: this piece is long, much longer than most pieces on YWS. ...

Hello, Pentavalence here with a review. Right off the bat, I'd like to add some disclaimers-- 1) While this review will focus on areas where you can improve, I do ...

Hiya, Pentavalence here with a review. Now, honestly, I'm not a big fan of poetry, especially prose poetry, and I can't review it that well. But I will try. So ...

Hi! A review as promised: So overall this was an interesting chapter. You set up the world and it’s intricacies very nicely. There’s intrigue, there’s conflict, there’s plot (hallelujah— I ...

Hi, Pentavalence here. I haven't done a review in quite awhile, so forgive me if I'm a bit rusty. So first of all, this was definitely an intriguing short story. ...

Hey, Pentavalence here with a review. First off, a couple grammar mistakes, nothing major. For example, "But sadly that’s not the case." Should be "But sadly, that’s not the case." ...

Hey, Pentavalence here. This is some lovely imagery and description you have here, but what exactly is it describing? Admittedly, I'm not the best at interpreting poetry, but this seems ...

Hi! Pentavalence here with a review. You're obviously really talented and I know next to nothing about poetry, so I can't find much to criticize. The lines "but I swear ...

Hey! Pentavalence here with a review. This poem was lovely--the rhyme and meter connected perfectly. The slightly outdated "thee" worked well, which was a surprise (we all want to sound ...

Hello, Pentavalence here with a review. First off, nice poem! It captured that haunting feeling very well. A couple of things that you could fix, although these are just suggestions: ...

Hi! Pentavalence here with a review. I enjoyed this poem, especially the first couple of stanzas. The tone's simple and sweet, and the rhymes all make sense (well, except for ...