PeanutPhoebe

Heyo! PeanutPhoebe here to review your work. Before I start, I want you know that I haven't been active in forever and have decided to start being so. So, that ...

Heyo! I finally got around to reviewing this! Considering I haven't been on YWS in a long time and haven't reviewed in... Well, let's not say how long, I'm more ...

As @priceofwords said, talk to someone you can trust! As far as the bullies, the godly reaction would be as polite as you can to them, and don't apologize for ...

Wow! This was truly amazing to have been written in 15 minutes! I agree with you whole-heartedly on every point you made. I'm sorry you have to put up w/ ...

Hey! I'm back!! Loved this Part, just like Part One... This is gonna be a pretty short review, since I'm liking so much of this story. I hope there's more ...

Hey! Here to review this part for you so I can go on to Part Two! I have to say, this was an extremely creative and clever idea. I love ...

Wow!! This was MUCH better than the first half! Now, I still don't know where you're going with Terri, Bredin, and Seth, but it was so much better! Again, it ...

Wait, what? You mean, like actually leading it?? And they're gonna charge instead of using magic and schemes and stuff? But...but...But Falyn knows nothing!! I mean, she does, but she ...

Hey! Just realized I hadn't reviewed this yet. My busy schedule has been taking me away from YWS a lot lately, so I am pretty slow at getting to stuff, ...

So the memories are important later on?? Is that what you were implying to r4p17?? I do kinda feel the same way though, they do kinda get on your nerves ...

Okay, so is George related to Akia?? And Zeke is with Phillip? And who's this new girl, Layna?? And while the Falyn and Zeke part is pretty well-written and kinda ...

AHH! How dare you put Zalyn in there?! She's supposed to be in love with Sam!! *breathes and calms down...* Sorry, I can get some serious fangirling with novels. Like, ...

I'm sorry. I have no clue how you expect anyone to review these chapters. They just getting more and more perfect and I love them! I am wondering how Aidan ...

Wow! Sorry this is late, but... school happened:/ I wish I could turn out chapters as quickly as you!:( Anyway, I really like the flashback in this chapter. So Akia ...

Hey! Here to review again! So, r4p17 covered all the nitpicks, and I didn't see any other grammar errors, so you're good in that department! :) All right, you said ...