Patrick

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lol, yeah!

I'll do it when I get the chance hun xxx

Ok, i'll do some work on it stay tuned. xxx

This is a good poem, I really liked it. "I'm as unprotected, As the flower that opens up." i liked this because it is great imagination. tis poem rocks!!! love ...

BTW, this is lexy on patricks profile.

Lol. this is good, because it is true. sounds like just the thing she would do. xxx

The time is here, ?Its finally? come, For me to do, What must be done. I put my hand to one (of) my sides, And take the gun, From where ...

I didn't know them personally but it really hit's home

It seems a little depressing doesn't it.

I like the way the poem flow's. I like the way that it reminds af a beautful day

Definately keep writing poems I liked it, keep up the work.

Read it while you were writing it. Want to read more, looking forward to it. xxxx

My first and rubbish attempt hope to write better soon Hehe! A question: what did you intend to get across as your message with this poem? :) That it is ...