Published November 29, 2006
My mistakes
Everyday I make mistakes
It’s the bane of my existence
So many mistakes have made
I put my foot in it everyday,
And I don’t know what to do.
[Chorus]
Every day
I make mistakes
I can’t seem to do anything right
This is hurting me in side
I just want to make you happy
I love you.
This is what I do
I feel foolish inside
How can I stop from?
Being an idiot
The only way I know how
Is it better myself in every way
Think before I do something
And before what I say.
[Chorus]
Every day
I make mistakes
I can’t seem to do anything right
This is hurting me in side
I just want to make you happy
I love you, can’t you see
I would die for you any day
You’re the only thing that matters to me.
I now know what to do
To stop this from happening
To move past my idiotic mind
And ……… be me.
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I'll do it when I get the chance hun xxx
I've made a few alterations that I think you should consider.
I liked it. And noticed it was about US.
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well done sweet heart