Published November 29, 2006
A better me
Amazing,
Yeah, I’ve been living in an amazing dream.
Nothing,
Yeah, I hope you'll never get taken away from me.
I'm never gonna stop,
I'm never gonna drop,
Ain't no different than it was before.
(Yeah, I love you)
I should take some good advice,
To stop and think twice,
Before I make a stupid mistake,
(One more time.)
[CHORUS]
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better me
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better ME.
I love you,
Yeah, I love you with all my heart.
Never,
Yeah, that's never gonna change.
I'm never gonna stop,
I'm never gonna drop,
Ain't no different than it was before.
(Yeah I love you)
I should take some good advice,
To stop and think twice,
Before I make a stupid mistake,
(One more time.)
[CHORUS]
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better me
I’m gonna step up (step up),
Change into a better ME.
Change into a better me………
Change into a better me………
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Ok, i'll do some work on it stay tuned. xxx
ARGH the repetition, lol.
Ok, Its not my type of thing, I think you knew that already.
Couldn't you change the use of "step up" though?
I mean, I understand that iys repetition as in song lyrics but a little bit of..... variety would be good.
Keep working on it though
lexy xxx