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Re: Just a Dream
Hello, Rodger! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! Also, welcome to YWS! NITPICKS - I will be providing four, but do what you want with what ...
Aug 10, 2017 -
Re: Continue watching....
Hello, AsherIsAnon! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! COMPLIMENTS - Before this piece, I read the other works before this, and I must say, this was ...
Aug 10, 2017 -
Re: the land of milk and honey : prologue
Hello, mephistophelesangel! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! FIRST IMPRESSION - I was a little confused after reading this. You are describing the main character as ...
Aug 7, 2017 -
Re: The House With the Graveyard
Hello, Lumos! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! Also, this is my 25th review, so that means a new star! Woooooo! FIRST IMPRESSION - The first ...
Aug 6, 2017 -
Re: Sever | Chapter 4: The Slayer Society
Hello again, jessegrey! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! FIRST IMPRESSION - The first thing that ran through my mind when I finished this was: "Wow, ...
Aug 6, 2017 -
Re: Sever | Chapter 3: Introductions
Hello again, jessegrey! PastelSlushie here for a review. let's get right into it! I also changed my reviewing format, hope you like it! FIRST IMPRESSION - When reading the first ...
Aug 6, 2017 -
Re: The Mage and The Immortal Chapter 1
Hello, Thundaguy! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! FIRST IMPRESSION - While the title did lead me in, I wasn't very interested in the plot itself. ...
Aug 6, 2017 -
Re: Moonless
Hello, LittleFox! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! FIRST IMPRESSION - At first glance, the story's description really intrigued me. The plot you chose for the ...
Aug 4, 2017 -
Re: No Good
Hello, Edeonsyn! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it. FIRST IMPRESSION - This whole piece of writing confused me. This feels like you took a chapter from ...
Aug 3, 2017 -
Re: The Definition of Good and Evil - Chapter 2
Hello again, LittleBird8060! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! First comment: I'm guilty of this as well, but there is too much talking in this chapter. ...
Aug 2, 2017 -
Re: The Definition of Good and Evil - Chapter 1
Hello, LittleBird8060! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! Also, I see you're relatively new, so welcome to YWS! First comment: The first sentence was a nice ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Three, Two, One
Hello, lolosboing! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! First comment: I'm not going to lie, this made me cry. I had to take a ten-minute break ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Tekky meets Shane (Spooksville)
Hello again, Halfbloodcheetah! PastelSlushie here for a review. Let's get right into it! First comment: This chapter is giving me a vibe of Twilight. With the vampires, and I like ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Spooksville Summary!
Hello again, Halfbloodcheetah! PastelSlushie here for a review. let's get right into it! First comment: While in the title, it says summary. However, it feels more of a prologue than ...
Aug 1, 2017 -
Re: Tekky tries to help an anemic.
Hello, Halfbloodcheetah! PastelSlushie here for a review! Let's get right into it! First comment: Now I don't go on Tumblr much, so maybe my question will be answered in the ...
Jul 31, 2017