Paracosm

Hey Ongo! I enjoyed this poem, it really brought beach imagery to mind. You did a good job characterizing different beach themes, like the waves, the lighthouse, and the sandpiper. ...

Wow! Nicely done, Methrirr. This poem was very well written. You have a great message in it to. It feels like a parable to me, and a stunning one at ...

Hey Haven! You're off to a nice start if this is your first poem. It starts off very positive, then towards the end shifts into a darker tone. That was ...

Hey niteowl! Congratulations on doing NaPo! This poem is very beautiful, I'm not sure there's enough for me to critique to warrant a review. There's plenty of material you could ...

Hey Host! You totally have a shot with this gal. Last I checked, chicks dig poetry. Now, to the actual review. I'm going to do a stanza by stanza review ...

Hey there Ariana! I'm going to do a stanza by stanza review. It'll probably be pretty short, but I'll do my best to help you improve. That'll be hard since ...

Hey Birkhoff! Looks like I'm on a poetry reviewing kick tonight, not that that's relevant at all. This review will go through each stanza, I'll point out some weaknesses, and ...

Hey Arturo! I hope you are enjoying YWS. I'm Paracosm, or you can call me Shino. If you ever need any help/reviews/just want to talk or whatever, feel free to ...

Hey there SoundofRain! I liked your poem, the chess references were especially enjoyable. What wasn't quite as enjoyable was the bold text. You don't have to bold the entire poem, ...

Hey there CM! You do an excellent job crafting visceral action. This piece was very well written. Before I get into my thoughts on the story, here are the typos ...

You have a very artistic style. I love it. It almost reads like a poem. At times, your message lost some of it's clarity. I'll pick out some of the ...

Hey Schubert! I'm going to do a quick review. While I love flash fiction, it can be hard for me to review, but I'll give it my best shot. Looks ...

Hey Vypy! I'm going to do a quick stanza by stanza review. I'll mostly just focus on structure, word usage, and what not, instead of bothering with themes. Judging a ...

Hey TragicHearts! I'm going to do a quick review. Forgive me if I get ramble-y, I have a head cold. To start with, I feel like your title is a ...

Hey WelcomingException, I'm going to do a quick review. You have an interesting theme here, be sure to do your research! You know that of course. I like Dmitry's and ...