Paracosm

Hey Slade! I'm going to do a quick review. Here goes. [i]There was a time where paranormal beings were not just that of myth and legend; a time where stories ...

I was going to say that 50 billion people could be a bit extreme, however... [i] Our urge to go forth and multiply could, a century and a half from ...

Hey Lee! The first thing that caught my attention was, there is an abundance of simile. However, I really enjoyed your descriptions. Try to find a way to blend them ...

This definitely reads more like an essay than poetry. It's a pretty awesome essay, but it still doesn't seem to fit into poetry in my opinion. Now, it could be ...

Hey Hero! Nice bit of satire here. I didn't catch too many problems with the rhyme, and you did a pretty good job keeping a rhythm you might run into ...

Verse 1: Nice entry, I feel that it is very emotionally charged. The last two lines aren't anything new though. You might want to consider something more original. Pre - ...

Hey September! Me again, back for more! Before we start off, let me begin by saying I forgot to mention something last chapter. You say that Abigale straps her purse ...

Hey September! Nicely done, you are clearly quite talented. Now, time to get to the meat of the review! You should take some time to mess around with the formatting. ...

Woohoo! Time for another review. Once again, I'm going to go through and critique each stanza. Then I'll share my overall feelings about the poem. Let's get started. Stanza One ...

To start with, I usually don't like long titles. This one is the the exception! I love it. I'm going to give you the quick stanza by stanza review, and ...

Hey LosCadaver! I think you could find a better word in place of 'amazement', in my opinion it is too similar to delight for it to add much to that ...

Hey PumpkinCat! If you can write poetry, prose isn't going to be too much of a problem for you. The hardest part about prose is powering through the shear bulk ...

Hey there Dhendon! I've finally gotten to your review. It's also appropriately timed for review day! How exciting! Go team blue! Anyway, your characterization is great. You get a strong ...

Hey Horus! I don't always review poetry, but when I do... wait, no. I'll just stop there. It's hard for me to review such a well written piece without simply ...

Hey Twit! This is one of the best first chapters I've ever read. The pacing and tone are both excellent. The setting is also very intriguing. I love how the ...