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Pen's here for you r review!! I think that this chapter is actually a lil better than the last, honestly. I love the details and descriptions you use. What did ...

Pen here to review! As soon as I red the first sentence, I wanted more. You've set up a wonderful plotline and you've put a lot of detail and work ...

Pen here, with a review! This. Is. Lovely. I've only ever read one apocalyptic book with humor in it, and even then it was just some stupid disease that was ...

Pen here with a review! This letter is really good. It's a perfect argument about being a vigilante, and the pain it causes. Though, I don't see the 'suicide' aspect ...

Pen here with a review! I can tell that this is the beginning of a good story, but perhaps we can fix it up in a few ways. As far ...

Pen here, with a review ^^ This poem is really good. I say no problems with grammar or spelling, but I really liked it. It's beautifully written. And it starts ...

This was really good. I can directly relate because I am a procrastinator. I know exactly what's happening in here, and that particular fact makes me feel connected. That draws ...

Pen here with a review, as requested! It's a good poem, and I can see the elements of humor, but there are still a few things that bugged me. *ba ...

It's a great poem, and I love the idea of using it as a prologue, but it didn't seem to flow well. I love the idea, and the imagery you ...

It's a great poem, but the one thing that stick out is how you have this 'abab' rhyming scheme, and it goes from "The fuzz and the lint don't bug ...

I love it. I know exactly the feeling put into this, so I can directly relate to it xD There was major that I saw that you should change, except ...

Literally, all I can think to say is wow. It's beautifully written. A tale of somebody searching for their faith, but can only find the seed of doubt. I went ...

Wow. This poem is so... Poetical. You did a great job using imagery, and it really draws the reader into the poem. I felt like I was watching this. It's ...

I really like this. It's perfect. Is it supposed to be a song? Anyways, I could see the author as he sits in his chair and smoking, or staring up ...

Wonderful! Your poem is written beautifully, and it's heart-touching. I can't offer many words to express my feelings, but it's beautiful. I love the lines, "So I try to find ...