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Re: My biggest weakness is love.
Hey Kayley 01, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off your title words should be capitalized. It would draw more attention to your poem. When I read it I ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: Do You Love Me?
Hey Casanova, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off this was a spectacular poem! I really felt the emotion in it. The love that you feel for this girl ...
Sep 20, 2016 -
Re: Clouds
Hey DivergentDemigod it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First this is a sad poem. I really felt the emotion in this poem. I liked the lines: She wanted to reach ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Balance
Hey DivergentDemigod, it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off, I liked how short this poem was. It definitely got the point across and tells you a lot even if ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Two Worlds: Chapter 2
Taya2019 it's AshleyDashley Here for a review! First off LOVED IT!! Second off I like how your doing the story in both Will and Ally's perspectives. It makes better for ...
Sep 19, 2016 -
Re: Two Worlds: Prologue
Hey Taya2019 it's AshleyDashley here for a review! First off I really like your title it really gets the mystery going and it made me curious. I see no grammar ...
Sep 16, 2016 -
Re: Synonyms
Hey DivergentDemigod it's AshleyDashley here for a review. I really liked your tile to start off with. But there is not really much here. I think it needs to be ...
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: Another Lonely Love Poem
Hey Cailey AshleyDashley here for a review! So first of all I'm a sucker for love poems. So yours caught my attention. I love the way you start the poem ...
Aug 5, 2016 -
Re: The Olympics Glory
Hey Siddharth! I really liked your short poem. I like first off the way your theme goes along with the Writing Olympics. Your poem really gets the energy going and ...
Aug 5, 2016 -
Re: The Time of Your Life
Hey Bailey! This poem was really good. I could literally feel the love you felt for this girl as I read your poem! I see no errors and that us ...
Aug 4, 2016 -
Re: The First Rainfall..
Hey Phangirldivergent46, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off I liked your tile. Second I liked how you started the night before the storm it really built up ...
May 23, 2016 -
Re: Not a story but a cry for advice!
Hey Borntoshop! I have this issue to. I compare myself to people all the time. I always call myself fat and people tell me i'm not but I believe it. ...
May 20, 2016 -
Re: Fallen Angel
Hey blueRaven2239, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off your title really caught my attention. And it made me want to read what you wrote so good job! ...
May 18, 2016 -
Re: When I was young...
Hey phangirldivergent46, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! I liked this poem your flow was nice and kept me reading. I like the description, because I could visualize what ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Runners - Chapter 2
Hey zsmith, it's AshleyDashley here for a quick review! First off this was a little boring but very informative and that makes up for it. I really liked it though. ...
May 17, 2016