Omi1

I might just be incredibly dense, but I didn't find this humorous or entertaining. Now before I say more, I ought to clarify that I want an explanation. As I ...

I can't say how much I loved was too good for words and the speech barrier compelled me from the very beginningvto read more. You are excellent at getting the ...

Hello Seraphinaxx! (btw, are you a fan of Beautiful Creatures? ...thats what your name reminds me of...) The words you chose in this poem were strong and not overly wordy. ...

To begin... That was a great poem! Your writing style is unique and enthralling. And as for the emotion, I have to say that is your strongest point. The characters ...

Like most good poems, I found this almost cryptic. You begin by describing writers block, but really you're describing life and the miseries included (possibly a bad relationship, too, but ...

I really like the concept you've introduced in this poem. It's unique and I think that is what sparked my interest. :) The title suited the poem quite well and ...

I was immediately drawn in! That was great. I can't say I'm a fan of the Hunger Games (I did read them though...) but this really peaked my interest. You ...

Hello EmilieHaugaard! Ok, so as to whether or not you want to expand this, I would totally go for it! You've created a rather vivid image in my mind, and ...

Hello and welcome to the yws! I hope you enjoy it and your off to a great start. Sounds like you really enjoy writing poems and that much is evident ...

Length was decent. Adjectives and descriptive words were appropriately used. The end was perfect. The theme introduced in this short story was very well done. And the feelings/emotions of the ...

Hello there! :) First off, I don't think many people particularily enjoy reading the same 4 words over and over and over again... Repetition can be used to play on ...

I really liked this and I love the idea of dedicating this to JRR Tolkien. :) The humor in here was great and I really appreciate the effort you put ...

Hello! Omi1 here to review! :) I figured I'd review this in light of the coming holiday season. My first opinion was that I liked it. There was some fairly ...

Alright.... :) This had a great start! The opening really got my attention, but toward the end, it kind of petered out... I feel like starting each sentence with the ...

Okay....aside from the fact that this was incredibly eerie, well done! I didn't see any obvious errors, so that's a good sign. :) And I agree with MysteryMe...this is very ...