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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Gazing into the future

    Heyy AiraPatricia! Here is SapphireFlames for the review! This is my second review for the day and again comes Technology! So anyway let me get to the article. Its again ...

    Oct 2, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Technology Re: "Technology - in various ways"

    heyy akosiab! this is SapphireFlames to the review! :) I liked the overall article and also the theme that you chose. Its good that you have referred a lot for ...

    Oct 2, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Think Like A Dude Entry #2

    Heyy Bloodink! Again this is SapphireFlames to the review. Dude seriously I am going to tell you something, If anytime I am depressed it could be of any reason I ...

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Think Like A Dude

    Heyy Bloodink! SapphireFlames for the review and finally all exams got over today and yeah free..... so free! And I am extremely sorry to make you wait for the comments. ...

    Sep 22, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Review Re: Maths

    Heyy Umaima! This is SapphireFlames for reviewing your amazing poem! Wow!!! your poem is soo good and amazing!!! I loved it and enjoyed reading it thoroughly. Wow!! even I feel ...

    Aug 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Under the Stars

    Hi Amosh94! this is SapphireFlames to the review! okay now about your poem, it was nice and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your piece! :D I loved these parts of the ...

    Aug 5, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Mr. Jerry

    Hi Umaima! this is SapphireFlames to the review! ahhhh this poem totally reminds me of my annoying little brother who is called the jerry in my house well , (MR.JERRY ...

    Aug 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Promise

    D'awwww! Its soo sweet!! I just loved the piece and totally enjoyed reading this piece! I loved the last part of the poem: "And we swore to each other, We'll ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Politics, Politics Re: something to talk about

    Hi Rishabh! I am here again after reviewing your other poem! okay , its a good poem and it conveys how angry you are about the Indian politics XD. Even ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Snake and nature.........

    Heyy Rishabh! The poem is good but has a lot of grammatical errors. First of all " i came out of my house for breezing" The 'i' in the above ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: I Wish

    Hi AONAR5! This is a beautiful piece! I liked it. the stanza that I loved the most: "I hope there is a reason why you won't speak to me , ...

    Jul 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: lost once again

    its an awesome poem I can say!!!!! I seriously liked your rhymings it was pretty good even though its big poem I could seriously imagine myself being lost! its a ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Two Types of Health

    heyy talkingbird! its a pretty good poem but I wanted you to explain little bit more...... I know you understand me,this idea is very well and precise and I think ...

    Dec 13, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Eternity

    heyy Anwesha! its a pretty good poem you wrote and it actually tells what love means to you. I guess it will be quite good if you write more in ...

    Dec 8, 2011


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