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Hiya, Aqua here to review. XD I really like this story, frankly one of the best I've read so far. I know how much of a challenge it is to ...

=.= I spent an hour writing a review for this and it just flipped on me. I hate when the Internet does that. Whatever. I'll start over. *feels kinda lazy* ...

I like it. It's different than things you usually see written in short stories. XD I'm a huge romantic, so let me get straight to it. I completely agree with ...

Aw! Honestly, this is really cute! X3 It reminds me of me and my brother stealing from cookie jars when we were smaller! XD Wow, how cliche. Me, not you! ...

Wow, this is really good. What pulled me in was the really engaging imagery in the poem. And I'm a huge sucker for beautiful, vivid descriptions. -.- And as I ...

Wow. O.O Bandit was right. It's amazing how much I can feel from this. For some reason, I really don't think I can write a proper review for this. Maybe ...

Hai, hai. I agree with Purple. First three paragraghs were simply (and I do mean simply) incredible and sweet. The rest is haphazard! >u< Also, this looks more like it ...

O.o That was a surprising end. Okay, to start off!! The structure! Nice, for a short story. But it still looks a bit untidy. ^^" Maybe because of all the ...

Heya! Aqua here! Now, when I read the poem, I immediately slipped into this funky little rythym. To-do-do-do. Something like that. I commend you on that. People always like poems ...

Wow. I like. O.O It's not as hard-hitting as other poems, but it's sort of... peaceful. Like floating on the sky, or listening to a river stream flowing by. I ...

Lol, this was so funny. I loved it! >u< Ooh, I found just one error. "For nothing else matter, his family was well." For nothing else mattered, his family was ...

Okay, well, super dark. Super gory. Super military-like. And pretty demonic. Sweet. >u< I don't really have anything to say about this, cause I can't really find anything wrong with ...

Hi, michaeld. I have to say, I absolutely loved your poem. Being a cutter... I really wish my dad had given me something like this. I just... understand it so ...

Awesome. Just...awesome. I can't really make this into a critique, because 1. Your story's short and there aren't much typical "story elements" to work with. 2. As this is a ...

Like I said, I really like this one and the plot and the character and the style of writing you wrote it in. A sort of grungy attitude. Awesome. :) ...