Noelle

Hi there! Gosh, I really loved this chapter. To be more specific I love this entire novel. Every time I think everything is good, something bad happens. There's always a ...

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Hi there! I don't really have much to say about this except that I think it's great and I can't wait to read more. I'm really into crime shows, specifically ...

*gasp* Not Aria!!!!!! Hi there! Had to get that off my chest. Don't leave me hanging like that! Ahhh! I want to know why she was there and what's going ...

Hi there! This is a great continuation from the prologue. With this chapter, I feel like I really know your characters. I never imagined that Derin was Aria's twin. That's ...

Hi there! I'm definitely intrigued. I absolutely love the fact that this is really short. The way I see prologues is that they should be short and sweet, giving away ...

Hi there! Sorry it took me a little while to get around to reviewing this. I also apologize in advance for the slightly lame review I am about to give. ...

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Hi there! An opening paragraph is very, very important in a short story. It's the first impression that everyone gets of the story. It has to be interesting, captivating. It ...

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Hi there! I just stopped by to tell you that I really like your lyrics. It's short, sweet, and to the point. It's almost written like a poem, which I ...

Hi there! It was a rainy and foggy day. The wind blew the rain gently into the forest, coating everything in a light drizzle. The fog enveloped all. Deep in ...

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Hi there! I really love the quote at the top! Just saying. Of course, no one could possibly forget Abigail Rider, the super duper popular, super duper smart, super duper ...

Hi there! Great poem you have here. I don't see any break in the flow, even though your third stanza is less lines than the other three. The words you ...