Noelle

Hi there! The sea shone like a diamond, dazzling displays of sunlight splicing through the water to create a rainbow effect of color along the small, white-crested waves as the ...

Hi there! Noelle here to review as requested. As I promised, I've read through all the previous chapters so I know what's going on here. Warning: this review might be ...

Hi there! Well, this is definitely different than the first first chapter ^_^ Looks like I'll have to stick with mostly nitpicks here because your writing is too good. Darn ...

Hi there! Everyone was either staring at her, or her dead grandfather, who was being dug a grave by some volunteers that were throwing their backs out. From what I've ...

Hi there! I haven't read any of the previous reviews because I'm lazy so if I repeat anything just ignore it. First off, I really like your title. It just ...

Hi there! I absolutely love your writing. I don't know if I've ever told you that. Opening lines are one of the things that I'm really particular about. It really ...

Hi there! The transition between chapters here isn't a very smooth one. At the end of the first chapter you left us with a cliffhanger, wondering what amazing thing is ...

Hi there! I promised you a few days ago that I would review for you and it took me a bit longer to get here than I thought. But I'm ...

Hi there! Me again. Expect this to be a long one. I'm gonna try and mention as much about the novel as a whole as I can, as well as ...

Hi there! Me again. Now I'm left wondering about Jay and Fleta. Please tell me they like each other. Pleeeassee! I so want them to be together. And the way ...

Hi there! Me again. This is the kind of surprise that I was expecting as Jay's initial reaction. Now the reactions are a bit messed up. At first he was ...

Hi there! Me again. Jay opened his eyes, dizzy. First, were his eyes ever closed? Second, the dizzy part doesn't really seem to fit. If he's dizzy, you might want ...

Hi there! Me again. I'm so close to catching up! :) Jay couldn’t help but laugh, thinking of how enamored Fleta was with Earth. “We sure had a heck of ...

Hi there! Noelle back again. But there was nothing: just floating gray rocks, smoothed on top and jagged on the bottom. Should be a semi-colon here instead of a colon. ...

Hi there! Noelle back again. Jay was starting to see the Enchantress as more of a pouty toddler than a powerful sorceress. Me too xD Jason felt like he was ...