Noelle

Hi there! Well, you've definitely caught my attention with this piece. It's quite a short prologue, but that's okay because you've put everything you needed to into it. There is ...

Hi there! So, as I'm sure you know, the most important part of a script is the dialogue. This important of course, because the story revolves around what the characters ...

Hi there! I love this. Really. This brings me back to a time in my life when there was a blog I felt this way about. These lyrics are very ...

Hi there! The text messages should really be in italics. That way the readers can distinguish between conversation and a text message. I apologize ahead of time because this is ...

Hi there! Me again. Chapter 3 He paused, vision crossing, drifting. Bright spots. A few creatures- black and hateful, hissing- and the face of Cole. He blinked, willing it away. ...

Hi there! I'm back again. “I’m gonna go smoke a cigarette. Try to solve that problem.” These two sentences should be switched. In the previous dialogue from this character (Reese), ...

Hi there!! First of all, don't you ever let me catch you saying that your work sucks again! Change that description right away! :P Your work never sucks. It may ...

Hi there! Let me start off by saying that I am very intrigued by this story. You have done a good job introducing your character. That's what really drew me ...

Hi there! I think this is a great chapter, especially since you're still at the beginning of your novel. It's always important to start developing your characters as early as ...

Hi there! Look at me actually getting here on time XD I really enjoyed reading this chapter. This is the part of novels I like to read (and ultimately write, ...

Hi there! Wow. What an ending. I really hate you for ending the chapter that way, but it's a good ending. I think I know what's going to happen, but ...

Hi there! I'll start off with your opening line: I lie here with a heartfelt pain sunk into my stomach, the good ole lifted plant, and bottles of vodka and ...

Hi there! I really couldn't find anything wrong with this so I'm going to be focusing on the content and plot in this review. But to start off, I do ...

Hi there! I'll start with the "negative" just to get it out of the way. This piece is a bit choppy. It's like one line of description (relatively speaking. I ...

Hi there! Alright, so I don't usually review poetry because I don't really understand everything about it and I don't want to criticize anyone on something where I don't know ...