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Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 23.
Hi there! Provided you are with the right teacher, Rease added mentally. ) You can easily take this part in the parenthesis and turn it into a thought. It just ...
Sep 8, 2014 -
Re: Dark as my heart
Hi there! First thing I notice about this poem is that there is no punctuation. There doesn't have to be punctuation in a poem of course, you can write it ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 22
Hi there! I really like the way you explain how Rease is signing what she's saying. It's important to the story because most people don't know how to sign. Giving ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Dawn of the Daughter of God, Pt. 1
Hi there! I know very little of history since I barely paid attention in class (yet another thing young Noelle did that was stupid), so don't expect any comments on ...
Sep 7, 2014 -
Re: Ode to Braces
Hi there! What I really like about this poem is how the speaker's tone changes by the time we reach the end. All except for the last three lines, the ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: freedom in the darkness
Hi there! I'll start off by saying that this is a wonderful little poem. It's totally not bad at all. I'm just starting to become a poet (using that term ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: One Hundred Sleepless Nights #1
Hi there! This novel is going to be composed of a series of letters, huh? I've seen that used only once before, in The Perks of Being a Wallflower . ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 23
Hi there! I'm all caught up! Weeeeeee! *ahem* Right, onto the review... Aaaand you totally answered my questions about the sticks from the last chapter. Why is it that every ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Partial Shade & Partial Sunlight- Prologue
Hi there! I decided to try what bats did So, I'm curious, why was this your MC's first thought? I mean, I wouldn't think about trying what bats do while ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 22
Hi there! I couldn't review your last chapter because it's so great, but I'm here to review this one! ... I accidentally read the last lines of this chapter before ...
Sep 6, 2014 -
Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy
Hi there! So, I didn't review the first chapter since you already had enough reviews there. You have plenty of reviews here too, but I figured I'd leave you one ...
Sep 5, 2014 -
Re: Broken Pencils are Pointless 2.1
Hi there! I'm super late with this review because that's apparently what I do with my life now, take forever to get to reviews -_- But I'm here now! Let's ...
Sep 2, 2014 -
Re: Ill Fated Love- Chapter 5
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Now, I haven't read any of your other chapters so bear with me here. Despite not reading previous chapters, I can ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 3)
Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Well, I haven't got much to say about this. I wish that I could give you a better review, but ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Secrets of Suburbia: Skeletons, Addiction & Betrayal (CHAPTER 2)
Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! I went back and read the first chapter, so now worries, I understand what's going on in the story. Oh gosh, ...
Aug 31, 2014
