Young Writers Society

Hey! This was a really good song! I especially loved how you use repetitions for emphasis. That worked out really well. I liked your descriptions. They conjure up this beautiful ...

Hey! First of all, if this poem is really about you, don't worry about the whole average thing. You'll find your niche soon. And I honestly sometimes envy my friends ...

Hey! Wow! This poem is great! Your title really caught my eye. I also liked your style, short and to the point, but deep. I think the "too" should be ...

Hey! First of all, I wanna make it clear that I personally don't believe in God, religion, and I'm not a big fan of Christianity. I was raised Christian by ...

Hey nightshadows! This was an amazing poem! I really like your opening line, "Dear the one I fell for," I like how you repeat the point that you're feeling are ...

Hey MapleWay! First of all, I'm so sorry for your friend. Now give me a minute while to wash my face, 'cause I can't see through all the tears. OK ...

Hey Ilium! First of all, great job with the concept. You opened the poem really well, and I was totally hooked by the first line. I really like this part: ...

Hey alliyah! First of all, wow! This is a beautiful poem. This should totally be in the literary spotlight!! I really liked how you repeat hesitantly in the first lines ...

Hey Haraya! First of all, wow! You have a thesaurus in your head. You have used beautiful words to great effect. I especially loved the ending of the poem. There ...

Hey! First of all, I love the whole idea of an Avengers fanfic. This may just be the secret ingredient that will heal the world.

Hey MellyBourne! I loved this poem! It had a lot of extremely powerful symbolism, which you have expressed in a beautiful way. The two paragraphs are kind of contradictory, but ...

Hey WishIHadASword! Wow! This letter has a completely different character from the rest so far...the others were playful and funny, but this is blunt, yet emotional. You've really captured the ...

Hey ticktock123! First of all, thanks for the advice. I really like how you express such a simple message in a poetical fashion. I kinda relate, because sometimes when I ...

Hey! First of all, lemme just say I really like the idea of this poem! Different people perceive you in different ways. You can be a dependable friend and a ...

Hey pineapply321! Wow! This is amazing! Once again, you have taken the tension to the highest possible level in the most delicate manner possible. I salute thee! I think it ...