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  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic
    Re: Only U

    Hey! This was a really good song! I especially loved how you use repetitions for emphasis. That worked out really well. I liked your descriptions. They conjure up this beautiful ...

    Apr 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: I can never be like my friends

    Hey! First of all, if this poem is really about you, don't worry about the whole average thing. You'll find your niche soon. And I honestly sometimes envy my friends ...

    Apr 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Other
    Re: I didn’t have FOMO until I met you

    Hey! Wow! This poem is great! Your title really caught my eye. I also liked your style, short and to the point, but deep. I think the "too" should be ...

    Apr 21, 2021

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other
    Re: Why I believe in God.

    Hey! First of all, I wanna make it clear that I personally don't believe in God, religion, and I'm not a big fan of Christianity. I was raised Christian by ...

    Apr 21, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Dear, the one I fell for

    Hey nightshadows! This was an amazing poem! I really like your opening line, "Dear the one I fell for," I like how you repeat the point that you're feeling are ...

    Apr 21, 2021

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other
    Re: For Mango

    Hey MapleWay! First of all, I'm so sorry for your friend. Now give me a minute while to wash my face, 'cause I can't see through all the tears. OK ...

    Apr 18, 2021

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Ms. Mirror

    Hey Ilium! First of all, great job with the concept. You opened the poem really well, and I was totally hooked by the first line. I really like this part: ...

    Apr 18, 2021

  • Poetry » Narrative, Romantic
    Re: quiet hello, quiet goodbye

    Hey alliyah! First of all, wow! This is a beautiful poem. This should totally be in the literary spotlight!! I really liked how you repeat hesitantly in the first lines ...

    Apr 18, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Late Night Drive

    Hey Haraya! First of all, wow! You have a thesaurus in your head. You have used beautiful words to great effect. I especially loved the ending of the poem. There ...

    Apr 18, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure
    Re: Avenger Interns. Chapter one. Part one

    Hey! First of all, I love the whole idea of an Avengers fanfic. This may just be the secret ingredient that will heal the world.

    Apr 17, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic
    Re: Two Kinds of Rain

    Hey MellyBourne! I loved this poem! It had a lot of extremely powerful symbolism, which you have expressed in a beautiful way. The two paragraphs are kind of contradictory, but ...

    Apr 15, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic
    Re: Lovely Assassin Letters (6)

    Hey WishIHadASword! Wow! This letter has a completely different character from the rest so far...the others were playful and funny, but this is blunt, yet emotional. You've really captured the ...

    Apr 14, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Advice for a YWS poet

    Hey ticktock123! First of all, thanks for the advice. I really like how you express such a simple message in a poetical fashion. I kinda relate, because sometimes when I ...

    Apr 14, 2021

  • Poetry » Culture, Health
    Re: The Mirror

    Hey! First of all, lemme just say I really like the idea of this poem! Different people perceive you in different ways. You can be a dependable friend and a ...

    Apr 14, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » General, General
    Re: The Girl Playing Dress Up-Chapter 5

    Hey pineapply321! Wow! This is amazing! Once again, you have taken the tension to the highest possible level in the most delicate manner possible. I salute thee! I think it ...

    Apr 12, 2021

“I am not worried, Harry," said Dumbledore, his voice a little stronger despite the freezing water. "I am with you.”
— Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince