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Niraco

Niraco

  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Hungry Cat

    Such a very humorous and slightly heart-warming poem I must say. I don't really know much about haikus so please bare with me as I review. As a person who ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Spiritual Re: You Take My Breath Away

    I tend not to read lyrical poetry but I should start, hence why I am here. Since I am not good at really dissecting lyrical poetry I am going to ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: I am, I am, I wish.

    Such a beautiful poem you have written here. I am the Candle in the Casket, so wanting to venture into the World of my Dream. I found a sense of ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Horror Re: The Pact - Prologue Rewrite

    I'll admit I didn't get very far in reading this. Really just for one reason: the formatting. Due to this being written in three big blocks it felt more like ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Horrible

    When someone writes a poem so short a thought pops into my head. 'How can someone put enough depth into a poem with such little words?' I believe you answered ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Stream of Consciousness- My Quixotic Dream

    I must agree with defyinggravity. When I first started reading it seemed like a rather generic poem and it just got worse from there in my eyes. The power to ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Lies

    Such an emotionally driven poem. Well done, reminds me a lot of school life. People say things wouldn't knowing the truth and I think that's why I like it so ...

    Nov 3, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: If Only

    Since the poem is so short I find myself rather lacking in anything to really say about it. I believe you have won at writing the shortest poem ever in ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: About Me

    When I seen the title I made a noise. A confused noise. How could some talk about themselves in the form of a poem? So I decided to read. I ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Narrative Re: my home is not a unit

    A very short and sweet poem. This poem I hold rather close to my heart as the subject matter you brought up has been hammered into me since I was ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Seventh Day Is Crimson

    I liked how you started off with a poem. It was a good way in grabbing me as I tend to read poems more on this site - even though ...

    Nov 2, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hope

    I really enjoyed this poem but didn't really feel any deep emotion within. I also felt that it was lacking in any original imagery. That being said, I also like ...

    Nov 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Culture, Spiritual Re: I have sisters

    What I love the most about this poem is the fact that you took an slightly overused subject and made it your own. I can tell you put a lot ...

    Nov 1, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Caped

    I found that this poem was a little hard for me to read as it brought back so many memories of a love one I lost. I could feel the ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Narrative Re: Young Man's Tale (Chapter 1)

    For me, the opening line is really one of the hardest parts when writing any piece of work. It's what grabs the reader, hopefully making them stay. Your opening line ...

    Oct 28, 2013


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