Hello Little Reader,
Oh how you wander so.
In a world where we're all dazzled
Instead of wanting to know.
But here you are seeking,
and seeking quite thorough
I appreciate you Little Reader
But I'm insignificant so...
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Hey! Molly here to review. Happy review day! Ok so the title is what got me really interested to see this poem. Your poem has a lot of meanings and it makes it so open for the reader. I like the depth in the poem and how it flowed so well. Each line just fit well in the poem. It was a little confusing to read as wording goes, but that could just be me. Thanks for reading my review. Keep writing and happy review day!
-molly
When I seen the title I made a noise. A confused noise. How could some talk about themselves in the form of a poem? So I decided to read. I found the poem very well written but I am still a little confused. I do not see how the title goes with the poem. The only correlation I really found was in the ending line
Perhaps I have interpreted this poem wrong - which I think is the case.
Anyway, another thing I liked how easily your poem flowed. One of the best lines in the poem - I found was:
For some strange reason I really like the word 'seeking'. I have no idea why, hahha.
All in all an enjoyable poem that I found didn't have any connection with yourself. Happy writing.
Thanks Niraco! I titled it "About Me" because this is what is written under the About Me section on my YWS profile. So when someone clicks the About Me link on the profile, they see this! For lack of a better title, poetic-wise, I used "About Me" as the title. I'm thinking for another one to use at the moment. Thanks for the Review!
I understand more, hahha. You're very welcome.
I'm a little confused. You're either a genius, or you're just running out of stuff to write about
Keep up the good work.
But I think whether you meant to or not, you created something so open, that you just read it and come up with a thousand meanings to it.. As I said earlier, either terrible or amazing, but I'm going to go ahead and think that it's the latter.
I'm confused towards your comment as well...but thank you! haha