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Re: Pinus
Hello! Poetry is sometimes so hard to understand until you let yourself feel the words of it, rather than just read it, kind of like music. Funny enough, I just ...
Aug 10, 2025 -
Re: Think twice before you hit send
First of all, hello. This was amazing. I haven't been on this site in years and I thought I should pop back and review some stories. I honestly enjoyed every ...
Dec 20, 2020 -
Re: That Fateful Christmas (for the Christmas Song Writing Competition)
Hello and welcome to YWS. I can see you just joined. I have been on here for like ten years (I'm old lol). I don't get on very often if ...
Dec 10, 2019 -
Re: Last goodbye
Hello CrystalRose! I'm here to review this short but very sweet piece. I'd like to start out by saying that your story was a beautiful love story about a cancer ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: deleted
Hello there scribbleinks (creative name)! I'm here to review. Deadline is May, huh? Well I think you've done some pretty good work here. I literally just watched Love, Simon lst ...
Mar 26, 2018 -
Re: Dear Jess. From, That Girl You Probably Don't Remember.
Hey there, it's Nike here with a review. Lemme be honest, it's hard to review pieces like these. Only because they are always supposed to be incorrect grammatically, and you ...
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: From a Dream
Hey there, it's Nike here to review! I see that you wanted ideas for this... well what you could do is maybe have the guy appear in her everyday life ...
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: I Hate Not Hating You
Hey there, it's me Nike here to review! First off, I'd like to say welcome to Young Writers Society! This is a community of writers', here to welcome you with ...
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: The Confession
Hey, it's me Nike, here to review. For starters I would like to say, welcome to Young Writers Society (YWS)! I hope you enjoy the site and find great friends. ...
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: Text Message
Hey, It's Nike, here to review! I found your story in the Featured Works, so I want to congratulate you for that! It's an amazing feeling to have one of ...
Dec 17, 2016 -
Re: The View From Behind the Rope: A take on school social hierarchy
Hey Haywire! I'm Nike here with some constructive criticism. Honestly, this wasn't a short story. Thing was more like a blog post. It has no depth. It's kind of just ...
Feb 10, 2015 -
Re: Sophie
Hey Steward! I'm Nike, here to review. So I read your story and, I really liked it. It was well written, it captured great emotion and... surprised me at the ...
Feb 10, 2015 -
Re: Intertwined Fates
Hello! Happy Review Day! I am a fan of FanFiction. And I adore Harry Potter. So when I saw this, I had to read it and review. The moon is ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Secrets
Hello! Happy Review Day! Things were the way they were at the beginning. An endless circle of too-bright smiles and too-deep eyes holding too many things. The questions that seem ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: My life
Hello. I'm Nike, here to review. It's not easy to review something like this because it seems extremely personal... like, I wouldn't want to ruin it. I can see you've ...
May 5, 2014
