Nikachu

Hey there! Okie dokie, this is a tough one. Honestly, if you didn't give me the background to this poem and the style, I wouldn't have understood it. That being ...

Hey there! Wow this piece is so strong. I am terribly sorry if this is based off something that you've experienced. But writing sure lets it out, doesn't it? Anyways, ...

Hey there! So I really like the idea behind this piece. What started out very innocent turned into fear and danger so quickly. Those last two lines threw me off ...

Hey there! So first things first, I really really enjoyed this poem. I love the comparisons you make. They are simply breathtaking. Okay, now that I've said that, I can ...

Hey there! Sorry I haven't reviewed any of your recent chapters; you know I've been busy with leaving the country and all. Anyways, I'm back! Praise Wow. This chapter reveals ...

Hey there! Wow I really liked this poem! Your imagery of a fake person being like clockwork is spot on and original. I think it's awesome! I actually enjoyed your ...

Hey there! So I really liked this poem especially the line "Dressed in wine." It has such great imagery and it feels like it has a deeper meaning...maybe? Anyways, I ...

YAAAAAASSSS! I've been waiting for things to get intense for a while! Thank you for bringing the story to a whole new level. I love all the little comments about ...

Hey there! So I can totally relate to this poem in every possible way and I think that you touch a lot of peoples' hearts with this piece. Every word ...

Wow. Wow wow wow. Breathless. Literally breathless. I love how real you are. Life takes you up and down and I know you haven't been really pleased with your recent ...

Hey there! Wow 17 chapters down *slow building clap* I think your story is really starting to build and I would advise you to take a step back and focus ...

Hey there! I like the whimsy in this poem. I really feel like I'm in a dream with you. I also like all your food imagery. Not many people take ...

Hey there! So I'm just gonna get to the point: I really liked this! I love the imagery you used with the stars and the fields in the distance representing ...

Hey there! So I like everything about this chapter. Really really great! The title of this chapter is awesome and it perfectly fits the situation. Your characters have such strong ...

Hey there! Yes I wanted this hidden chapter so badly! Hehehehehe I love your narrators! They're so full of life and personality. I love how you give the reader glimpses ...