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Re: Silence
I surely will. Thanks for the review
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: The clouds that were grey....
Thankyou so much%u2764%u2764
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: Woman in Baerenschanze
This has a nice beginning. It could be a prologue of some novel. The imagery used is amazing. It makes you visualize very clearly. I believe it is a bit ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: The Shadow
The story has a nice framework. Nicely done with that. Although, I did not quite understand the ending. The story can go ahead a bit too, if you want to. ...
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: The clouds that were grey....
Thankyou so much. Means a lot%uD83E%uDD17%uD83E%uDD17
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: The clouds that were grey....
Thanks %u2764%u2764%u2764
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: Truth about friendship
Thanks a lot! Yes my rhyme scheme is a bit rusty maybe cos I got carried away. It's a bit irregular. Will look into it.
Feb 6, 2021 -
Re: Truth about friendship
I understand your opinions and respect them........but I don't entirely mean people should tell every bit of their lives to others......the thing is, speaking of experience, I don't like it ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Elephants have Wrinkles
It's really humorous. Yes you should finish it, it talks about romance in a way I have never seen before😂😂❤. At first it seemed like a rap to me, you ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: science is scary; poetry is scary
I found this poem funny and meaningful at the same type........you are right, at first even I felt poetry was very complex.......then I got used to it😅......but the comparison with ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Black Lives Matter
This poem sent chills down my back......I am not an American but I know the situation of racism is quite bad there.......I believe if this poem is published in some ...
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Your Love's Gone Cold
Nice lyrics......they are pretty meaningful......go ahead and make an actual song.............I really liked the following lines "You went with the stars and left me with scars" "Stuck in the deepness
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: the things you share
This poem really tells us about something that looks simple but can get also tells us the importance of sharing it..........the poem is small but conveys a great meaning........nice❤❤
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: Even the wind goes...
Hi Tanishka That is a beautifully deep poem..........I admit it took me time to understand😅😅...........but that makes the poem even better........Really nice....... "None for anyone is the world
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: .
That explains your painful situation very intricately......Nice metaphor to use..........even if the rhyme scheme stopped matching a bit later I really liked the conveys a powerful message...
Feb 5, 2021
