A PERFECT COMBINATION OF ART AND SCIENCE.
I found this poem funny and meaningful at the same type........you are right, at first even I felt poetry was very complex.......then I got used to it😅......but the comparison with the test tube.......that one was an excellent metaphor....
..it is a simple poem and I liked it......Though I genuinely did not understand the ending😅.........but I am new and I will become better I guess
But you used a lot of scientific terms which also enhances the poem and makes it more technical
aah. the second stanza! i genuinely loved that one. i admire your idea of putting poetry like an experiment. it was like you are finding your mind- where your mind lies. again saying, overall, i really loved and enjoyed the poem.i enjoyed the scientific vocabulary.and your theory of writing is really good! each and every line potrays a valuable meaning. and the idea of peeping into your own mind is really important i really don't have any construction criticism as i am new in reviewing others.
I love this so much. I think the best part, in my opinion at least, is how you used creating a hypothesis as a metaphor for writing poetry. It alludes to the idea that poetry is like an experiment on the human soul, a way to discover new traits and emotions, and thoughts within yourself, the way that scientists work to discover new elements and find solutions to this world's problems. Almost as if you're peering into a microscope and investigating the world inside your mind, rather than the physical world outside of it. It really makes one reflect on the parallels between art and science. I don't really have any constructive criticism, since I'm new to the reviewing game. Overall, I really enjoyed this poem and the way it can make you think if you so choose to.
It alludes to the idea that poetry is like an experiment on the human soul, a way to discover new traits and emotions, and thoughts within yourself, the way that scientists work to discover new elements and find solutions to this world's problems.
It really makes one reflect on the parallels between art and science.
I really like the idea of scientific vocabulary. I don't know if it's just me being dense but I don't understand what it's about unless it's just scientific vocabulary. Is the point that you're trying to make that if you know science, you can dissect the meaning of poetry? Overall, the words in this poem contrast each other well poetically speaking.
I really like
"I put my inspiration into a test tube along with all of my energy and watch as they react"
I don't know if it's just me being dense but I don't understand what it's about unless it's just scientific vocabulary.
Overall, the words in this poem contrast each other well poetically speaking.
Ahh, this is such a lovely poem!! My favourite stanza is your second; I love the idea of putting inspiration in a test tube and then watching it react. What a neat piece <3
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