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Re: Would you like an apple pie with that?
Hello! NightWolf here to review. Wow. Just wow. I was expecting a very light humorous poem. And here I am sitting in amazement at it's dark undertone. Not many people ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Zom-Brawl
Hello! NightWolf here to review, as you requested. Your first line was amazingly captivating! It hooked me straightaway. It's unusual, shocking and makes me ask a lot of questions. If ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: S.O.S
Hello, NightWolf here to review for you! For starters, I'd like to congratulate you on conveying such a clear point. Sometimes it's very easy to wander away from the original ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Expectations
Hello! NightWolf here to give you a review! Firstly, I must say this is an awesome, nicely-wrapped poem! You convey a simple, but powerful point that is shown very strongly. ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: A peace buster, the story behind occasional serene.
Hello, NightWolf here to give you a review! I love this poem, and that is simply because of its imagery. You really set up some great description here. Your rhythm ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: Derp
Hello, Knight NightWolf here to review. Thanks for this little poem. It honestly made me smile, especially since I've had a bit of a bad day. It's short, and sweet. ...
Jan 31, 2014 -
Re: Alfred Hitchcock
Hello, Knight NightWolf here to give you a review. This poem really stands out to me, it's unique and original. Well done. One of the triumphs of writing is having ...
Jan 30, 2014 -
Re: Existence
Hi, I'm Nightwolf. Welcome to YWS! I love the simplicity of this little poem. It has a very beautiful meaning, portrayed in the final line: "I want to live, rather ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Defeated
Hello, Knight Wolf here to review your poem for you! This poem was amazing, it clearly portrayed its meaning, and everything about it just interconnects. The word choices are a ...
Oct 30, 2013 -
Re: Touch my dream, paint my reality.
Hello, Knight Wolf here to review for you today. I love this poem, it portrays a clear image, and it is just amazing. Flow When I read this aloud, for ...
Oct 29, 2013 -
Re: Cutter???s Pride
Hello, NightWolf here to review your poem. First off, I don't think title is supposed to have three question marks in it. I'm sure this is a typo but, you ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: Envy
Hello NightWolf here to review your poem today. The passion and emotion in this is very clear, I can just see it through your words. I see no grammatical errors ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: You changed you name but couldn’t change your face.
Hello NightWolf here to review your poem. I like this poem, it is short and sweet. I also love the meaning of it. It's original and creative. Well done. I ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: Changed Soul
Hello NightWolf here to review your poem today. I see no flaws whatsoever with the actual poem, so here is a very hearty well done. I see the emotion you ...
Oct 27, 2013 -
Re: The Road Once Traveled
Hello NightWolf here to review your poem today. This has to be one of my favourite poems on here. It's amazing. I can tell you are a talented poet. I ...
Oct 27, 2013
