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NightWolf

  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Would you like an apple pie with that?

    Hello! NightWolf here to review. Wow. Just wow. I was expecting a very light humorous poem. And here I am sitting in amazement at it's dark undertone. Not many people ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Zom-Brawl

    Hello! NightWolf here to review, as you requested. Your first line was amazingly captivating! It hooked me straightaway. It's unusual, shocking and makes me ask a lot of questions. If ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: S.O.S

    Hello, NightWolf here to review for you! For starters, I'd like to congratulate you on conveying such a clear point. Sometimes it's very easy to wander away from the original ...

    Mar 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Expectations

    Hello! NightWolf here to give you a review! Firstly, I must say this is an awesome, nicely-wrapped poem! You convey a simple, but powerful point that is shown very strongly. ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: A peace buster, the story behind occasional serene.

    Hello, NightWolf here to give you a review! I love this poem, and that is simply because of its imagery. You really set up some great description here. Your rhythm ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Other » Humor, Other Re: Derp

    Hello, Knight NightWolf here to review. Thanks for this little poem. It honestly made me smile, especially since I've had a bit of a bad day. It's short, and sweet. ...

    Jan 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Alfred Hitchcock

    Hello, Knight NightWolf here to give you a review. This poem really stands out to me, it's unique and original. Well done. One of the triumphs of writing is having ...

    Jan 30, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Existence

    Hi, I'm Nightwolf. Welcome to YWS! I love the simplicity of this little poem. It has a very beautiful meaning, portrayed in the final line: "I want to live, rather ...

    Jan 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Defeated

    Hello, Knight Wolf here to review your poem for you! This poem was amazing, it clearly portrayed its meaning, and everything about it just interconnects. The word choices are a ...

    Oct 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Touch my dream, paint my reality.

    Hello, Knight Wolf here to review for you today. I love this poem, it portrays a clear image, and it is just amazing. Flow When I read this aloud, for ...

    Oct 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Cutter???s Pride

    Hello, NightWolf here to review your poem. First off, I don't think title is supposed to have three question marks in it. I'm sure this is a typo but, you ...

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Envy

    Hello NightWolf here to review your poem today. The passion and emotion in this is very clear, I can just see it through your words. I see no grammatical errors ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: You changed you name but couldn’t change your face.

    Hello NightWolf here to review your poem. I like this poem, it is short and sweet. I also love the meaning of it. It's original and creative. Well done. I ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Changed Soul

    Hello NightWolf here to review your poem today. I see no flaws whatsoever with the actual poem, so here is a very hearty well done. I see the emotion you ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Road Once Traveled

    Hello NightWolf here to review your poem today. This has to be one of my favourite poems on here. It's amazing. I can tell you are a talented poet. I ...

    Oct 27, 2013


I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault