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Re: The Butterfly Sickness
Hi there Dmytra!Have a good here I am to make a review on your poem! The Butterfly Sickness-The title actually really caught my eyes to read it.And also the theme ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: To Wish Upon a Hope
Hi there Cailey,have a good day! So here I'm to make review on your wonderful poem:) I really love the theme you bring here in your is about hope and ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Glass Girl
Hi ERZA,have a good here I'm to make my review on your poem about the 'Glass Girl'. WHO is actually the Glass girl?? -That is the first question i had ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Lonely Room
Hi Legibletext,here I'm to give my review!Have a good day:) I agree with some comments/reviews they give,but to be honest your have its own ideas/way to make the reader think ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Dreaming of You
Hi AnnaKarenina!Have a good day:) Your poem is kinda short one,but still good to read and nice to digest in my thought.Overall,I love the way you use the words to ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Sleepless Thoughts
Hi there,InfinityAndBeyond have a good day!So here I'm to make my review on your wonderful poem. Overall,your poem has it own idea,that is-unique plus with imaginary then here it come,a ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: The Person Inside Me
Hi HostofHorus,have a good day!Here I'm to give my review on your fantastic poem! First of all,I really love the theme you want to present is about the real you(the ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Who Are We Without the Rain?
Hi Wherethewindgoes,have a good day! First of all let me greeting you a happy review day in YWS! Okay,the first thing i saw here is the punctuation!My eyes caught on ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The King of The Damned
Hi Lady purple,have a good day1 Honestly,it is a nice poem to read even though the using of word 'Damned'!The way you play with the words is quite nice,acceptable and ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: desperate times desperate
Hi Audy,have a good time! I see your peom is kinda unique with your own ideas just flow with a theme about let review your poem in the first stanza ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Don't Tell Me
Hi Annapurna,have a good time! First of all I generally like the originality of your piece of mind that you are talking about anything imposible to you that no one ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Sky Haven
HI again Blackwood.have a good day! Wow,your poem is really such a beautiful one to digest in mind.The rythm is just fit with every single lines.Perfection is not really important ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: The Worm Goblin
Hi Blackwood,have a good day! This is Nightwalker going to make a review on your poem. Okay,I see that you are not really care about capital letters here.See, you did't ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: A Stone Man
Hi,Imhero,have a good day,this is Nightwalker going to make a review on your poem! Honestly,I agree with the others comments/reviews.It's true that you have a good poem and idea to ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: #1 Melancholy
Good day ScarlettFire. This is night walker wanted to give a review on your wonderful poem! First of all,I love the way you describe your feeling and I can feel ...
Jun 28, 2013
