NicoleBri

Im in the grass on my knees, wipe the leaves away..

Well it is great! :) I love the song Lucy so it was touching to read.

Oh em gee. I am about to cry. This reminded me of a song called "Lucy" by Skillet. If you havent heard of it i suggest you listen to it.

Haha aw thank you! :) I have yet to make their story but hopefully I will.

Thank you!:) Chapter two will be finished soon, I haven't had too much time on my hands to finish it, but it will be out.

Lol, yes it should have been Lana. I just really like the name Melonie and got caught up. Thanks for the review.

Well, I'm here to say, not all lefties are in fact gay. I here am a lefty and that's just great. :D I like this poem, it could use work ...

You're welcome!!:))

Haha maybe so! You're welcome! :)

Is this an actual experience or did you just make it up? :) It sounds like it really could be a real life problem :/

Lol I know.

Thank you! :)

Pandabear here. Wow. This really depresses me, I like works like this. You did great on the rhyming and it flows really good. I can't really find any flaws! Keep ...

That was kind of rude, maybe he/she didn't know of Microsoft word. Some people's computers don't have it where it corrects misspellings either.