NerdBurga

I really loved the thought you put into this poem. I think the rhyming was a bit strained in some parts, and in this review I'll show you just what ...

You have good ideas for this story, I'd just like to give you a few tips to improve it and have a nice polished final copy. The red is corrections, ...

I loved this! Loved it! I would never have thought of this kind of idea for a poem, you have awesum creativity :) I have to agree that the second ...

I totally agree with adding more to it. I think if you are able to keep up that descriptive lagnuage you should easily be able to make a really touching ...

I reall liked this, I thought it was nice and simple, you didn't need a whole lot to put an image in my mind and to let me know what ...

Yeah so I really like it.. :) I think it has beautiful language and great metaphors. One thing is I can see why some might not get what it's about. ...

Wow, ok I really liked this :) I think one thing about your poem is that so many people can relate to the message you're trying to convey here, so ...

Ok, so thanks for putting up your poem :) I think it really has potential, I just want to point out a few things. Some tempestuous lyrics, like after-rain mud ...

First off, well done! I like this poem because it is about love, but it's also very optimistic. Let me get the constructive criticism out of the way, but just ...

So first of all, well done on writing such a big piece :) Just a few things I thought to point out: First of all, you need to work on ...

This poem had a great message in it, very touching :) I will just point out a few things, I hope I don't seem to critical "I wore the dress ...

A really touching poem, one that makes the reader have a deep think. I would just like to point out a few things: I stand the grave of Tina McKlur. ...

I really like this poem and can relate to the author's feelings. Just remember to start every line of the poem with a capital letter. There isn't much else for ...

Wow I loved this :) It had a great sensitivity to it and I loved the way you just casually got round to explaining that you were another couple, instead ...

This story really sucked me in. I loved how I had a sense of what was going to happen, and yet I felt like I had no idea. It got ...