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Re: Why I believe in God.
It's worse than yet another "I'm 13 and hopelessly in love" poem? You had an emotional reaction to the poem, which is exactly what good poetry should do.
Jan 27, 2014 -
Re: Karma
Gotcha! I haven't got far into the game yet, so I figured a lot of stuff was referring to things I haven't come across yet. I'll have to check that ...
Jan 10, 2014 -
Re: The King's Gambit
That change does sound much better! It seems to flow more naturally, and it further establishes the upbeat melody.
Dec 6, 2013 -
Re: Cursed by Cupid
No worries Ossum. I marked it as a review for you!
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Rebuilding Thunder Chapter 2
What the what!?
Oct 3, 2013 -
Re: Through the Eyes of a Monster
Good to see this in the Literary Spotlight. Thought this was great.
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Advertisement
This is better posted in the forums. I'm locking it.
Aug 4, 2013 -
Re: The Clara Barton House
I find it ironic that the last comment on the first bumped literary work is about not bumping!
Jul 6, 2013 -
Re: It's Not You, but It Isn't Me, Either
I like it. Just leaving a comment to say that the style of the poem is very similar to that of Clark Coolidge. If you've never read any of his ...
Jul 1, 2013 -
Re: Chasing Somewhere 2
Not to worry, I marked it as a review!
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: in my father's garden
I like it.
Mar 1, 2013 -
Re:
No one is judging! They're critiquing, which is what a lot of YWS is about. If you're just looking for a place to post your story online, this probably isn't ...
Feb 1, 2013 -
Re: Tell All
Dear God. Either you're Lady Gaga, or Gaga copied you.
Jan 24, 2013 -
Re: Zenshi ichimi
Hey Karzkin, send me the original text of the work to webmaster@youngwriterssociety.com. I'll take a look into why the Japanese characters aren't appearing. Thanks!
Jan 13, 2013 -
Re: Don't Go
Clearly because it was twice the awesome.
Dec 12, 2012