Nate

So I went ahead and checked out submachine after reading this a few days ago, and it's awesome. I used to love point and click adventure games, and it really ...

Hey Greenlight! I think you did a great job with capturing the voice of Azula. She's not someone who's prone to self-examination, but when she does take a step back ...

Hey Yehuda! The Cat's in the Cradle is an incredibly haunting song -- it uses an upbeat melody driven by a clever use of rhyme and meter to mask what ...

First Hunger Games fanfic I've ever read, and it's interesting to get the viewpoint of someone from another district -- especially from the point of view of a tribute from ...

Hey Alex! So I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, but I liked this piece overall. The imagery was quite strong and used to great effect to convey an overall ...

Of the four poems listed, I think I like the second one the most. It's not the smoothest, and the second line is a bit awkward, but it's the most ...

One thing that I think you need to do is to define technology. Are you referring to just modern technology, or do you also include stuff like saddles on horses ...

I like how you open with a quote by Einstein, but you forgot to note that he said it! All you need to do is include something like, "this quote ...

You forgot your citations! Don't forget to include them. In any case, what I really like about your essay is that it begins right away with defining technology. This is ...

Very interesting essay. One of the things I worry about with the Internet is that you have an entire generation now growing up where participating in online forums and having ...

I like how you take a long-view technology, recognizing that humanity has always been shaped by the tools we develop. In today's world, the Internet is transforming the way we ...

It looks like you forgot to include citations! You included parenthetical citations which are great, but don't forget to include a citation to the original work at the end. In ...

I like very much how you start by defining technology. I've seen a lot of essays where the writer never took that important step, and so you're left wondering how ...

I like your point about how modern technology can actually lead to less human interaction. All too often, we look at how the Internet is bridging great distances between cultures ...

As kedjil stated, you have a very effective and powerful opening. "One wrong move and you'll die," instantly grabs the reader, and I like how you continue the rest of ...