Nate

Ok, so now I really think Kenway did something to his traveling companion, Reginald. His defensive reaction, his evasiveness, and his guilt all, to me, point toward him being at ...

I think this is the strongest chapter yet that I've read. Once again, I really like the different names given to the environment: the Agressi Mountains, the Gnofen River, Holden's ...

Is this maybe supposed to be chapter 4 to Fury in the Wind? It's not included in the folder for it, so maybe it was misposted? Anyways, I think it ...

I like the transition from the previous chapter to this one. The previous chapter was about a group of military men travelling through a desert. Here, we're in a small ...

Hey Messenger! Starting a Chapter 5, but I'm going to do my best to read the rest of the chapters in order. I think you do a great job with ...

Hey booklover1026! I think your story is a good example of flash fiction. It's a quick read with a small, self-contained plot. It's also a plot that any of us ...

I like how you ended the chapter with a couple questions directed toward the reader. That's actually really helpful. What did you think of the council? Do they come across ...

Hey! It sounds like this is perhaps to meant to be a prologue for a book. If so, I like the personal essay format for opening a book. It introduces ...

Hey Snoink! I've had The Conqueror on my reading list for a few months now, and I'm finally getting down to reading it. It's probably unavoidable, but I tend to ...

I picked this story up near the end, so there's still a lot of details that aren't totally clear to me, but I feel like I have a good handle ...

What decision did Issac make!? I don't really mean that as a matter of suspense. I just don't think leaving that on an ambiguous note really works here. Even if ...

I feel like Alice! Definitely some strange stuff going on. Just to reiterate what I said earlier, I like how you're switching back and forth between beats in the action. ...

Hey! Finished chapters 17 and 18, and now reading chapter 19. I like how we're returning to Shadowscale after the Alice / Issac chapter, but it is a bit jarring ...

Hey Necromancer! I just finished Chapter 17, and I'm going to try to make my through the remaining chapters. So first, I really like how this opens. The last chapter ...

Hey Necromancer! Like @LadySpark, I'm jumping into this in the middle, but I like what I'm reading. If I'm reading it correctly, this is set in a universe where dragons ...