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Re: The Lady Who Carries A Torch (By Jasmine)
Honestly, I love how you took a conversation about love and just flipped it on its head to talk about liberty instead. That whole idea of freedom being frantic rather ...
Apr 11, 2026 -
Re: when the tears are gone
I love how it has such a deep, realistic, rich (as in like food rich) feeling and It describes me and many others including possibly you! I am the therapist ...
Apr 10, 2026 -
Re: What to Do, What to feel?
This poem is WOWIE YIPPIE CHEF'S KISS! It is truly amazing how you used the different sections to show the journey from being heartbroken to finally finding peace. The way ...
Apr 10, 2026 -
Re: Ao R??u/ Meu primeiro post
IT IS ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL! It's so heavy, loving, real, to the point where it doesn't feel hurtful, it feels and unleashes something deep inside. Some amazing sense of sadness that ...
Apr 10, 2026 -
Re: Suicide Note
BEAUTIFUL BEAUTIFUL🥹 IM IN LOVE WITH IT! I WOULD MARRY IT! It's so amazingly written and spoken in my head! It gives so much emotion and realness feeling to it ...
Apr 10, 2026 -
Re: Hard to Make, Easy to Break (By Lavender)
You could use bold to make the CLEAR AND LOUD parts really scream off the page, and use italics for the unhinged detail part to make it feel like a ...
Apr 10, 2026 -
Re: prayers without answer (revisited)
This poem is CHEF'S KISS! It is truly amazing how you used such heavy, ancient sounding words like pulpit and communion to talk about such intense grief. The way you ...
Apr 10, 2026 -
Re: a.e.m
This poem is CHEF'S KISS! It is truly amazing how you wrote about such a deep and heavy topic but made it feel so personal. The way you described the ...
Apr 9, 2026 -
Re: I love slurping Tea... and You (By Jasmine)
This poem is CHEF'S KISS! How it transitions from those heavy, dusty philosophy books to something as warm as a cup of tea. The way you list all those different ...
Apr 9, 2026 -
Re: Good Bones
I LOVE the little examples like," ground down, flipped around, sawed, reassembled, " It's beautiful and fantastic! This shows emotion, empathy, and life. This poem is seriously cool and super ...
Apr 8, 2026 -
Re: Scarlett and Kenneth’s origin: Souls and Roses ⭐️🌿
I love how you added the dash right before they barged in which indicated it was sudden. Your frantic emotions to make sure Raven had gotten out and how rushed ...
Apr 8, 2026 -
Re: The Brightest Star (By Lavender)
I LOVE HOW IT RHYMES AND CONTINUES WITH MEANING TO EACH AND EVERY WORD!! It's like every word has its own backstory and keeps connecting and connecting and it feels ...
Apr 8, 2026 -
Re: routine of a depressed neurodivergent
I love how it shows a life like it's in a paradox where its just repetitive! The periods end phrases nicely and make them seem more dramatic and stronger than ...
Apr 8, 2026